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Old 05-03-2013, 01:19 PM   #2
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get a sixth sense for the slick shit if I wrote it
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^^Best bar of this imo.
I'd actually like to hear this on audio because I think it would transfer well to it because reading something that seems to be suited for audio in text seems stupid you know? That's not insulting this piece at all like for example the pun bar would be good on audio but not in text. But I still rapped it aloud and really emphasized PUN INTENDED. lol. All in all it's a good drop chyeah. I don't think I've ever read anything from you on here to be honest but keep it up and keep droppin man.
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