Razah 5-3 vs NYCSPITZ 3-1 - RAZAH 6-3

YDK · 10-10-2015, 02:57 PM

This was a cool battle, gotta short vote short on time.
Razah had a nice clean piece short and sweet and mechanically sound and a solid concept.
NYC had the longer more storytelling approach that I always enjoy. Not as sound as a whole because I felt it could have been fleshed out more to have a more ccomplete ending but the details and story were awesome. I just wish it were longer because I was really interested lol
Overall I gotta give my vote to razah for the more complete piece but NY had the "cooler" story lol
Dope battle guys
Vote razah

10-10-2015, 02:57 PM	#12
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	This was a cool battle, gotta short vote short on time. Razah had a nice clean piece short and sweet and mechanically sound and a solid concept. NYC had the longer more storytelling approach that I always enjoy. Not as sound as a whole because I felt it could have been fleshed out more to have a more ccomplete ending but the details and story were awesome. I just wish it were longer because I was really interested lol Overall I gotta give my vote to razah for the more complete piece but NY had the "cooler" story lol Dope battle guys Vote razah __________________

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