CONTENDERSHIP MATCH: Frank 2-1 vs EtH 2-0 - ETH 3-0

[e11even]

Frank- one question... What the fuck?? I laughed really hard reading the bold topic slapped onto the end of the verse. That shit was hilarious. You obviously were under the impression this would be a no show and it just amazes me how many times people throw up no-show quality verses and then the guy/gal actually shows up. I find that to be entertaining. Anyway, this was not your bag and you were clearly goofing but I see the topic being the mouse is about to catch the trap or the cat all for the dream of finally getting that perfectly grated block of cheese. I did not dig this piece but I dug the comical slap on at the end. Good job?

EtH- I liked this. I'm not really sap-friendly when it comes to pieces, but I liked how you played off a singular trait(perfume) the entire story. What I didn't like is that the extra 10 lines you went over could very well have been shortened, as it felt kinda long winded and rantish in parts. The overall feeling of this was very positive and joyous for me as you did a good job putting the reader inside the protagonist's to experience your character's love and longing. The rhymes were very simple and plain, but some metaphors were interesting, some kinda goofy(Cause even sour grapes can make the sweetest wine). You did a good job and it's obvious you're no slouch with tropicals.

Frank pulled a Longest Yard and threw this match up, but EtH came prepared and out wrote the competition. I appreciate both you guys showing and thank you for giving me the opportunity to vote. MVGT ETH for an overall better written and enjoyable experience.