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10-01-2015, 03:51 PM
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NYCSPITZ
Gutter with a gift of gab. The mid sentence parallel of hood description and edumacated diction was distinctly original. Story was straight up New York Nas-like story telling. This verse would still resonate with someone from out of state cause of its appeal that's just so real. Like I said, the back and forth between slang-like lingo and sophisticated vocabulary was dope here. Classic ghetto shit. Verse was like Sundance Slumdog YDK YDK is either keen on winning the First Ever Netcees 12-14 line Topical Tournament or he thought NYCSPITZ wasn't going to post. Poor excuse bro. Always assume your opponent is writing the verse that is going to destroy your topical career. This blurb of a verse could've been a finals in the First Ever Netcees 12-14 line Topical Tournament. I would be interested in reading a big boy verse from you. 34-44 lines MVGT NYCSPITZ
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