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death warmed over
Join Date: Jan 2013
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okay two dope verses both very different styles... I thought eth was just a bit of a drag on a topic that has been done to death.... he definitely had some ill thoughts and everything but I think spoken just came with that deadly shit that really took this battle... for me I would have like to see eth come with something that was more relatable I felt at times it was hard to imagine this war hero who has fallen because of his lover or something like that and if I didn't get it please don't be mad at me im only discussing your verse with an open mind but I just felt like ive read this too many times and didn't feel empathetic for your character as much as spokens.... which came on a whole nother level I thought I really connected with your piece and the connections that were being made one line after another which was a better read and something that I felt like I could relate to... don't know just wasn't feeling eths story about soldiers fallen at a battlefield...maybe I missed something but you weren't what I was looking for this week....sorry please don't let this vote bother you because I felt like this battle could have gone either way but I just felt spokens approach to the topic more even though it was a bit altruistic in a sense but still felt he was the writer with the better verse......so..........
vote: SPOKEN
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