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Old 09-13-2015, 06:01 PM   #1
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Originally Posted by JShazo View Post
@WalkingDead
Ya'll.

Any site That I repped . They call me the king there
you ain’t even the foremost of niggas that constitute netcees here.
I like the idea, reminds me karaokes regular ones line. But urs needs harsher wording.
Seen the way u type . U think thats first class
Getting to switch numerous characters . Rockstar North is signing ya ass.
aiight
Facin me. fool u about to get thralled
Like smug Bowlers in Cricket . you stepping over the line with no balls
needs a better set up, imo
This fuck be a low life prick ,more of a negative type
only positive sign he rocked had switzerland’s flag Stripe
flow isn't great. could've multi the end rhymes. This could've been worded better in the set up to make this punch more effective, creative idea tho
Plus
He dont know hip hop. he’s here to act fellas
What he writes comes very close to wraps like quesadillas
ur lack of smooth rhyming is more apparent then ur punching, a lot of ur bars sound unfinished, like ur missing a few words to make em' completely hit
he got no friends, girl ,family to hang or talk about
Masturbation be the only time he tries to come out
no
By taking one glance at this loner’s book shelf visually
i knew 100 years of solitude got him great impact.. i mean literally.
aiight
With such names. you aint climbing heights in this biz
levi’s 501 filed on for a trademark change. knowing about who strauss
why aren't u rhyming? think u have too much going on here, totally fizzed ya shit

Whatever.
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Originally Posted by sraL View Post


WalkingDead... aka Rudge1, aka Diss Kabob, aka Linesman...

aka a nigga who shoulda stayed hiding under a fuckin rock...

Ohh so u Chi town's own then huh?...

Aye yo...
I'd watch da Bears w/ ya chic, Cutler's they biggest star
But only thing movin up in da pocket's her hand when she tuggin a nigga hard
ok
I'd dismantle u proper, hand on da Glock, animal, monster
Hammer is cocked bruh, a few clicks & u'd checkout like an Amazon shopper
cool
Aloe, Sime, Res, & Rygar ALL treated u like a casual poo
& since u Cottonelle w/ them niggas I'll go ahead & wipe my ass w/ u too
LOL, nah but was funny
Fuck ya statements.. ur dead & shooting's da sole factor
Whatever u say I'ma get around da point w/ lead like I'm using a protractor
aiight
But 4get typin shit at u.. I let da steel just bark instead
These shells can spinoff into ya brain, but we NEVER Fear the Walking Dead
spinoff/prequel
I'll off ya head, & u won't escape da punching whirlwind
If u Kabob & weave bitch, u just spendin time w/ ya bald head ass girlfriend
lol
Strik keeps it tyrannical, bully nerds type yo, please Bob
I'll just hold down power & start pushin this square like a iphone screenshot
fire
See dog u wack as shit, mostly we all laugh at ya scripts
Anybody feeling Lines just did 3 rails of molly & read ya verse after it kicked
nah

Squad.
Strik got this,
walking dead you need to work on making ur bars rhyme bruh, work on wording your shots to be more harsh. You came off close to statement-ish to me cus of how soft ur shit sounded compared to strik's wording. Also if your diss kabob shame on u for not using constrikta personals
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