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Om
Join Date: Jan 2013
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smooth shit homie. like a laxative. classic. content wise you kept this on point and wrapped it up very nicely. The scheming was cool too, even allowing me to look past the fact that the verse is centered! Fag!
jk, but the beginning half is when your schemes were the tightest and most expertly crafted. Nice, enjoyable read. Id like to see more.
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Erebus
Join Date: Jun 2013
Posts: 435
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Erebus!
Next time ima change it to comic sans.
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ghost in the matrix
Join Date: Apr 2013
Location: Covington, KY
Posts: 4,563
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Holy fuckin shit it's been way too long brother how you been?
Lil yd btw lol Where the hell have you been?
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