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Old 09-13-2015, 05:46 AM   #1
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smooth shit homie. like a laxative. classic. content wise you kept this on point and wrapped it up very nicely. The scheming was cool too, even allowing me to look past the fact that the verse is centered! Fag!

jk, but the beginning half is when your schemes were the tightest and most expertly crafted. Nice, enjoyable read. Id like to see more.
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Old 09-13-2015, 01:04 PM   #2
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even allowing me to look past the fact that the verse is centered! Fag!
Next time ima change it to comic sans.
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Old 09-13-2015, 01:31 PM   #3
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Next time ima change it to comic sans.
Holy fuckin shit it's been way too long brother how you been?
Lil yd btw lol

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