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04-29-2013, 10:48 PM
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Om
Join Date: Jan 2013
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Your rhyme scheme was twistin n turnin all over the place lol. Not to say that's a bad thing, I thought it was different... different meaning good btw.
This definitely feels like a verse from the AOWL, it stays on topic and is carefull not to veer off. I nearly lost interest towards the end however. cool piece man.
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