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Pharaohs Army · 08-13-2015, 10:36 PM

Tbh it's cool from a rhyme perspective.
And maybe you threw it in there subconsciously as a frustration of how dark the night can be and how "empty" the world can be when viewed through a certain lens.
Or it was written first and then you just made a good but totally unrelated verse above it.
Or maybe it was, more generally, a sort of purposeful anarchy to contrast with the rest of the story.
Do you like how I'm still speculating? It's fun. And maybe that's why you wrote it-- to have the reader speculate.

Or maybe, as I contend, "for the fuck of it".
I still stick by that one.
Close thread plz (< jk on that part).

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08-13-2015, 10:36 PM	#4
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Tbh it's cool from a rhyme perspective. And maybe you threw it in there subconsciously as a frustration of how dark the night can be and how "empty" the world can be when viewed through a certain lens. Or it was written first and then you just made a good but totally unrelated verse above it. Or maybe it was, more generally, a sort of purposeful anarchy to contrast with the rest of the story. Do you like how I'm still speculating? It's fun. And maybe that's why you wrote it-- to have the reader speculate. Or maybe, as I contend, "for the fuck of it". I still stick by that one. Close thread plz (< jk on that part).