just some lines

[K Panda]

I like the closing line, real nice, never seen that before.

As for the rhyme scheme, real solid, i like. The only part im not a fan of is:
I'm the monster hiding under the canopy bed
under the canapoy head hurts my head, i understand it helps set up the following rhyme scheme, but it hurts my head as a image.

Other than that, good writing.