Week 3: 2Tripple0 0-2 vs. Razah 1-1 [Razah 4-0]

Inno · 08-06-2015, 09:07 PM

Ribbit

Short and sweet. Liked this verse alot like j said one of your better showings.
You stumbled a couple times bit not enough to really hirt your piece. Thought you
Stuck to the topic very well through out but like i said you stumbled a bit
Here and there. If u would of wrote more you could developed the story enough
To let those mistakes pass by.

Razah

This was dope man. Thought your wnding was your best part. Once you revealed your
Angle it got much better. Felt like your beginning dragged just a bit for me. But like i said
Your ending picked up and really set the piece down in a rwally nice place. Well done.

Overall

I think ama go with razah in this one thought his piece had enough to take this
Reallly close bout tho. Ribbit is really coming into his own and i feel like hes sbout
To drop some srs ill shit. This week though razah showed up. Good battle fellas

Razah

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08-06-2015, 09:07 PM	#10
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,026 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Ribbit Short and sweet. Liked this verse alot like j said one of your better showings. You stumbled a couple times bit not enough to really hirt your piece. Thought you Stuck to the topic very well through out but like i said you stumbled a bit Here and there. If u would of wrote more you could developed the story enough To let those mistakes pass by. Razah This was dope man. Thought your wnding was your best part. Once you revealed your Angle it got much better. Felt like your beginning dragged just a bit for me. But like i said Your ending picked up and really set the piece down in a rwally nice place. Well done. Overall I think ama go with razah in this one thought his piece had enough to take this Reallly close bout tho. Ribbit is really coming into his own and i feel like hes sbout To drop some srs ill shit. This week though razah showed up. Good battle fellas Razah