Silence

Pharaohs Army · 08-05-2015, 10:07 PM

Or is it day? All I know is passionate finally found it's new language in the things we never had to say.
I speak with my eyes too wise to let words escape my lips, too unwilling to discontent our bliss. Too much of a risk, so we let, the tips, of our fingers do the talking.

you're already good at imagery, and encapsulating emotion and syllabic structure, and all that.
Thus I would like to see more of what I quoted above. And I'm referring to the structure not talking about the content.

lol that sounds pretty grandiose "I would like to see.."
but you know what i mean. i think.
i'm one to speak, frankly I should(and will at one point)try my hand at these kinds of works.. you know, like this one which Zen wrote and then forgot about. lol

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08-05-2015, 10:07 PM	#12
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Or is it day? All I know is passionate finally found it's new language in the things we never had to say. I speak with my eyes too wise to let words escape my lips, too unwilling to discontent our bliss. Too much of a risk, so we let, the tips, of our fingers do the talking. you're already good at imagery, and encapsulating emotion and syllabic structure, and all that. Thus I would like to see more of what I quoted above. And I'm referring to the structure not talking about the content. lol that sounds pretty grandiose "I would like to see.." but you know what i mean. i think. i'm one to speak, frankly I should(and will at one point)try my hand at these kinds of works.. you know, like this one which Zen wrote and then forgot about. lol