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07-24-2015, 07:53 AM
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Banned
Join Date: Jun 2015
Location: New York
Posts: 2,047
Battle Record: 16-9
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working that pole was meannnn
reflective style was ok light up head was meannnn pipe up was ok hammer was basic IMO but good concept/pic reference I guess tongue click could have been dope but didn't like your tie in. what does grabbing him have to do with his tongue clickin? (my african language bar in LLL was better tho lol) vs jelly had potential fell flat for me cuban same as above - lazy ineffective execution didn't like blowin him out the water ignoring could have been delivered a lot better. had potential paints too tight was funny tho hahaha - nice 50 shades of gray was meannnn damn remy ya verse was very stale bro but your last 2 bars were hot. should have wrote more like that man. what I mean by stale is, you had some decent concepts but your route of execution/delivery on them was weak, wack and/or lazy man. Your last 2 bars were dope imo but not enough. orc got it on consistency |
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