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07-23-2015, 02:04 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2015
Posts: 164
Battle Record: 5-7
Rep Power: 3710883   |
Iam
Opener had a lot of potential, just fell flat at the end String of words was an almost French tips was ehh Madden games was ooook, played concept tho Mean with words verbal abuse is played also I've seen hot dog before to but I feel like u referenced it cool.. Different twist made it ok Didn't like the closer to much either Dre Opener was ehh Mexican employment is pretty darn played Stuck up coulda been doper, minus the simile, Gow's cousin was ooook Dead dogs named spots.. Lol ur funny man, wasn't that bad tho Lay bust down was pretty good Closer was ok, Iunno this was a soft battle, lotta played not much fresh twists to um.. Iam just gotta take different angles man cos u got some cool concepts n honestly imo if u use similes make um dope af or it takes impact away.. Dre wasn't digging this verse that much either but u structured ure shit better n landed a couple more than Iam therefore I got u edging this... Dre |
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