AOWL CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: zygote (7-1) VS. Red glare (6-2) [ZYGOTE WINS, 5-3.]

IamBenT · 04-25-2013, 10:01 AM

Gonna make this short sorry.

ZY-great vocab, strong angle on the topic, very descriptive and out sideof the box. Some of it bored me asit gott near the end but plenty of hot fire

RG- good god man this was for me a long and somewhat painful read. There is brilliance mixed with tedium, but y ok u do a pretty good job of weaving quotes with rhymes.but it was just toomuch and seemed to lose steam for me

Vote- Zygote FOR a better overalll verse

04-25-2013, 10:01 AM	#9
IamBenT SuPreaM Lyricyst Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: San Antonio, TX Posts: 704 Battle Record: 9-6 Rep Power: 412358	Gonna make this short sorry. ZY-great vocab, strong angle on the topic, very descriptive and out sideof the box. Some of it bored me asit gott near the end but plenty of hot fire RG- good god man this was for me a long and somewhat painful read. There is brilliance mixed with tedium, but y ok u do a pretty good job of weaving quotes with rhymes.but it was just toomuch and seemed to lose steam for me Vote- Zygote FOR a better overalll verse __________________ *A.bove T.he R.est* IamBenT\|Genocide\|MikeWrecka\|Objective\|Vulgar\|Witty \|Rawn MacDon Last edited by IamBenT; 04-27-2013 at 12:31 AM.

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