Swerve 0-1 vs Mr. J 0-1 {Swerve wins}

Useless · 07-17-2015, 11:25 AM

Bullet pharm was decent but nothing special. Chicken little was cool. Wasn't feeling baby moms to sleep, not a great flip. Again death stroke was OK but kinda played. Had to Google Ben stiller/chip Douglas nbthat always takes away from the line for me but it was worded weird too but once I got the concept n reread it it was decent, but still. Didn't like the closer.

This was simple but I thought it was OK. Again this was super simple. Alzheimer's was cool. Bags email was nice. Seen a better el chapo line by credit this week iirc but this one was nice too. Again Joe metts had a better lama the line bar this week but yours was still aite.

This was a good battle overall. Both verses were smooth and easy reads. But ibthink swerve got it with better wording and a cleaner verse. Mr j had a good verse too tho.

V. Swerve

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07-17-2015, 11:25 AM	#1
Useless 100% Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 1,803 Battle Record: 9-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 0	Bullet pharm was decent but nothing special. Chicken little was cool. Wasn't feeling baby moms to sleep, not a great flip. Again death stroke was OK but kinda played. Had to Google Ben stiller/chip Douglas nbthat always takes away from the line for me but it was worded weird too but once I got the concept n reread it it was decent, but still. Didn't like the closer. This was simple but I thought it was OK. Again this was super simple. Alzheimer's was cool. Bags email was nice. Seen a better el chapo line by credit this week iirc but this one was nice too. Again Joe metts had a better lama the line bar this week but yours was still aite. This was a good battle overall. Both verses were smooth and easy reads. But ibthink swerve got it with better wording and a cleaner verse. Mr j had a good verse too tho. V. Swerve