Ace 1-0 vs Remy LeBeau 1-0 {Ace wins}

[Allen Knight]

Remy Lebeau verse

Find this dude love, shit..even cupid would balk.
I gotta plot to merk u, so he made a thread pointing out how fuckn stupid u talk.
I don't think uve EVER had pussy, man that shit is lame and tragic.
Girls rain checked him so much he followed the rainbow.. n became a fgt.
Ur not a gangster, torture him till this man is a vegetable.
so if dude caught a charge..its thru the cables I got clamped to his testicles.
I'm beating u. That's pretty much 'nuff said.
no discussion, you'll be adding MY name to YOUR list in Hush's thread.
Chinese? Japanese? All we know is ur Asian.
So when u act like a big baby, all we WANT to know is what's ur relation.
I write to crush, make u bite the dust bro u messing with a tiger.
Just say good night n hush, cuz even u know.. they both slept u in the cypher.
U know ur girls not faithful, ur too skinny, s'why she likes it when I ride n break her.
Last time u did a pull up..was changing diapers on a kid who looks alot like ur neighbor.

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Ace

Aiyyo
Put them magic books down u nerd.. that shit is weird
Cuz ur social status doesn't need a smoke bomb, bitch.. to the world you've already disappeared.
this is good but its eh, magic books and smoke bombs.. arent smoke bombs ninja shit? the connection vague af b
Bro u can save ur fake personals. I'm gonna beat ur ass..
I'll hook you so hard ur 'head will be in a Spiral' like you fell asleep in class.
ok, but this light
This week will pass & u'll stay a virgin, this geek showed me his plan..
Fuck a Gambit. Nigga ur sex life is the only thing that's gonna explode from your hand.
thats dope
If beating me is ur biggest feat then buddy u got wrong views..
Cuz that'll be relying on the Impossibles to juggernaut ur career like Tom Cruise.
i dont get why u used the word juggernaut in here.. i never saw the tom cruise movies but i feel like u said juggernaut just bcuz its a xmen tie in, but it dont help the punch.. it just makes the wording awkward
C'mon son. When the revolver spits your whole core's bobbled..
Call me Acura. My cylinder's leavin this RL X'd on the fuckin floor modeled.
love the concept, but on the floor modeled? its not nrmal speach. nobody talks this way so it makes the punch fizzle for me
You gettin outworked, boy. If I let u live u better thank Christ..
Cuz u gettin Drilled. You have half a Vault's chance & this is a perfect bank heist.
lol ok. honesty i dont think this is resin or ur mad rusty or u didnt try, ur shit in the cypha was way fresher.. half a vaults chance? thats not even a cliche or a idiom b. this is me being 100 with u no sneak diss shit, this line just aint hot brodie. no offense. the getting drilled/bank hiest shit i get, and i see u wanted to add another layer to it, but nah
So now ur left marred, scared.. I'll split you.. this aint a hard spare..
Cut the brave shit, faggot. I just made you lose ur Nerve quicker than chemical warfare.
nice, simple but it hits. not to bone pick but that setup was baaaaad my guy
Mahfucka.
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Originally Posted by Allen Knight

Remy Lebeau verse

Find this dude love, shit..even cupid would balk.
I gotta plot to merk u, so he made a thread pointing out how fuckn stupid u talk.
eh
I don't think uve EVER had pussy, man that shit is lame and tragic.
Girls rain checked him so much he followed the rainbow.. n became a fgt.
ok
Ur not a gangster, torture him till this man is a vegetable.
so if dude caught a charge..its thru the cables I got clamped to his testicles.
lol ok but yo, this is why battling is a nuance thing to me.. why didnt u say thru cables he clamps to his own testicles then imply hes some kinda wierdo, bcuz this kinda makes u seem wierd lol
I'm beating u. That's pretty much 'nuff said.
no discussion, you'll be adding MY name to YOUR list in Hush's thread.
heads up, if a thread isnt on the first page with TONs of posts during the time ur dorpping ur verse it can hurt u. this line fell flat imho
Chinese? Japanese? All we know is ur Asian.
So when u act like a big baby, all we WANT to know is what's ur relation.
light
I write to crush, make u bite the dust bro u messing with a tiger.
Just say good night n hush, cuz even u know.. they both slept u in the cypher.
ehhh
U know ur girls not faithful, ur too skinny, s'why she likes it when I ride n break her.
Last time u did a pull up..was changing diapers on a kid who looks alot like ur neighbor.
light

Remy had a WAYYY doper verse last week imho, this verse was flat. It wasn't bad, but it had no jaw droppers, no oh shit lines. Which made it not very memorable. Ace had some concepts but had some REALLY bad wording at times which really suprised me. It seems like both these dudes came halfway at each other. Maybe they didnt go for the throat cuz they both old school aliases? I dont know but this battle is honestly a let down for me. It didnt want a debateable I wanted to see someone catch a hommy.


The best line of the battle was that Gambit/jerkoff line. Remy you had too many namedrops and references, you should of just punched cuz the rainbow and charge lines were your best bars. Charge line was actually really really dope but the wording could of been more offensive to him, more of a attack. Ace verse just read funny in places, like if you say some of that stuff outloud it just dont sound normal. I get this is text but that just is a pet peeve of mine.

Vote Ace


could of went either way. Rep to both but I hope you niggas bring it next week. Also ya'll should rematch at some point cuz this could of been much more.