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07-12-2015, 03:02 PM
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Pattern: this pays her rent, happens I spray her legs. After, we make a mess This was the only section I didn't particularly like, thought it felt a little out of place given the content and context of the rest of the piece, you know? Rest was very well written, Rikoshay-esque at times as I read it. Keep that pen moving!
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