Hush vs Destroyer (Destroyer wins)

Vulgar · 07-11-2015, 03:24 PM

Both came with a whole diff approach to poetry.. Hush had this self aware connotative type of tone, to where it seemed like a grain of philosophy about this new technological age. It was too short for me to gain any insight from it, tbh... could've expanded on a particular piece of technology or cited an event in history where people weren't ready for some invention/or where our generation is headed. More stanzas would've meant for impact for me, personally.

Destro had a neat, though somewhat predictable, poem connecting social media platforms, and showed how self expression is all about the "click of a button" now but it's so deceiving even we believe it sometimes when we watch the words on a screen. With so many avenues to "express ourself" we feel the need to share our changing emotional tides like we are the Coast Guard or something. I thought it was cool.

Vote - Destro

More affecting, better impact.

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07-11-2015, 03:24 PM	#11
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Both came with a whole diff approach to poetry.. Hush had this self aware connotative type of tone, to where it seemed like a grain of philosophy about this new technological age. It was too short for me to gain any insight from it, tbh... could've expanded on a particular piece of technology or cited an event in history where people weren't ready for some invention/or where our generation is headed. More stanzas would've meant for impact for me, personally. Destro had a neat, though somewhat predictable, poem connecting social media platforms, and showed how self expression is all about the "click of a button" now but it's so deceiving even we believe it sometimes when we watch the words on a screen. With so many avenues to "express ourself" we feel the need to share our changing emotional tides like we are the Coast Guard or something. I thought it was cool. Vote - Destro More affecting, better impact.