ribbit 0-0 vs Chyeahhh Guevara 0-4 - CHYEAHHH WINS

Maximus · 07-04-2015, 06:15 AM

Alpo got this easily with the donkey and adam garden lines, they were both solid but couldve been better with cleaner wording. Ribbit obviously is a noob and had nothing at all but don't give up @ribbit go to the archives and read how the greats did it, u got to incorporate metaphors, wordplays, nameplays, misdirections, personals etc, there have to be a concept from which u build upon to diss ur opponent, not just by rhyming words randomly. Keep battling.
V/alpo

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07-04-2015, 06:15 AM	#8
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	Alpo got this easily with the donkey and adam garden lines, they were both solid but couldve been better with cleaner wording. Ribbit obviously is a noob and had nothing at all but don't give up @ribbit go to the archives and read how the greats did it, u got to incorporate metaphors, wordplays, nameplays, misdirections, personals etc, there have to be a concept from which u build upon to diss ur opponent, not just by rhyming words randomly. Keep battling. V/alpo