IAmRhetoric 0-2 vs Alpo the Alpha 0-3 - RHETORIC WINS

Sn00p · 06-28-2015, 12:41 PM

We really waiting, is this dude alpha yet?
A be seein D's without a firm grasp of the alphabet..
^cool
I don't think I'm alone here, what you drop is lackluster
Drop wack n we'll see he pasta way because I fed him w/ shells like an italian grandmother..
^not bad. punchline coulda been cleaned up a bit. drop wack part was unnecessary.
Hold up yur hands buster, i got fists of timber that'll leave you injured
Break ya knees to splinters, have ya ribs seeping inward, this one right'll keep you hindered
^right will keep u hindered? idk if i'm missing some wp here...
I'm the winner you fuck, and you're a beginner you chump,
The only metal you have is the one you got at the Dinner for Schmucks
^okay
I'll always keep the heater tucked, you need to bend for yours
My crew like the Navy Seals saying "Objective Alpha has been secured"
^this was solid idea & connection, but could'a been expanded upon to make it rly good
Every word from the crowd is "damn" like I was payin for an adlibber
Act your age or I'll have kids so young they don't have hair pulling hairtriggers
^not bad. flip could be better
Damn nigga! My sick bars will educate you in the chemicals
You getting worse and worse every day like the racism in America
^okayyy

nice verse. u getting better. sometimes the flips cud be better to make the line hit even harder

vs.

shouts to Sharp, I sure needed this handicap match
you wanna be down? I'll leave you there permanently, and I aint tryna bring that Brandy track back
^eh. this is a rly old reference lol. not the hardest hit
I heard you're like..... trying text again on some 2nd childhood shit
yah style doesn't turn heads, even Linda Blair would yawn at u while you spit
^eh. this is rly old
yah audio is wack, you'll never make it to the album shops
and you're only known for lying on tracks, like Malcom's pops
^okay
fuck your pro tool sessions
war is what I have in store and I'll give you the beats in your local produce section
^beats beets? ehh
the hawk will leave you bleeding out, the hands? a similar fate
you were a loser yesterday, you'll be a loser tomorrow, what makes you think you'll be a winner today?
^uh, this doesn't hit hard
I'll champ your moms anus, and have yah aunt tape it
you like irony?
my SUV's outside with a copy of L&O SVU season 1 in the rape kit
^connection's not strong enough. kinda decent tho
your words rhyme but they lack substance, substantially
I'm a rapper that'll put you in a duffle bag for a ransom fee, then charge a Ransom Fee
^okay

idk. chyeah felt kinda uninspired. i've seen much better from him. but he had too many played things here and things that kinda went nowhere. so yea. idk what happened. rhet was decent. he's still got a lot to learn, but he's getting better for sure. he got this pretty clearly, more consistent and less misses.
v/iamrhet

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06-28-2015, 12:41 PM	#8
Sn00p General German Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 1,988 Battle Record: 26-12 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Line4Line Cypher Tourney - Back2Basics - Fight Night XLVI Rep Power: 15213753	We really waiting, is this dude alpha yet? A be seein D's without a firm grasp of the alphabet.. ^cool I don't think I'm alone here, what you drop is lackluster Drop wack n we'll see he pasta way because I fed him w/ shells like an italian grandmother.. ^not bad. punchline coulda been cleaned up a bit. drop wack part was unnecessary. Hold up yur hands buster, i got fists of timber that'll leave you injured Break ya knees to splinters, have ya ribs seeping inward, this one right'll keep you hindered ^right will keep u hindered? idk if i'm missing some wp here... I'm the winner you fuck, and you're a beginner you chump, The only metal you have is the one you got at the Dinner for Schmucks ^okay I'll always keep the heater tucked, you need to bend for yours My crew like the Navy Seals saying "Objective Alpha has been secured" ^this was solid idea & connection, but could'a been expanded upon to make it rly good Every word from the crowd is "damn" like I was payin for an adlibber Act your age or I'll have kids so young they don't have hair pulling hairtriggers ^not bad. flip could be better Damn nigga! My sick bars will educate you in the chemicals You getting worse and worse every day like the racism in America ^okayyy nice verse. u getting better. sometimes the flips cud be better to make the line hit even harder vs. shouts to Sharp, I sure needed this handicap match you wanna be down? I'll leave you there permanently, and I aint tryna bring that Brandy track back ^eh. this is a rly old reference lol. not the hardest hit I heard you're like..... trying text again on some 2nd childhood shit yah style doesn't turn heads, even Linda Blair would yawn at u while you spit ^eh. this is rly old yah audio is wack, you'll never make it to the album shops and you're only known for lying on tracks, like Malcom's pops ^okay fuck your pro tool sessions war is what I have in store and I'll give you the beats in your local produce section ^beats beets? ehh the hawk will leave you bleeding out, the hands? a similar fate you were a loser yesterday, you'll be a loser tomorrow, what makes you think you'll be a winner today? ^uh, this doesn't hit hard I'll champ your moms anus, and have yah aunt tape it you like irony? my SUV's outside with a copy of L&O SVU season 1 in the rape kit ^connection's not strong enough. kinda decent tho your words rhyme but they lack substance, substantially I'm a rapper that'll put you in a duffle bag for a ransom fee, then charge a Ransom Fee ^okay idk. chyeah felt kinda uninspired. i've seen much better from him. but he had too many played things here and things that kinda went nowhere. so yea. idk what happened. rhet was decent. he's still got a lot to learn, but he's getting better for sure. he got this pretty clearly, more consistent and less misses. v/iamrhet