iSpaz 3-3 vs Tic 4-3 - SPAZ WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@iSpaz @Tic

[Tic]

Sup

[iSpaz]

Yoo

[iSpaz]

Ayy.

First I'll catch you alone. Then that fuckin chrome'll have you lit.
But there's no need to Draw it out... when my plan always been 'a tac, tic'.
Eagle eye. I'll send bullets flyin cause guns is what I still do.
So when I bang 10 Rounds.. it's just to prove I'll go the distance to kill you.
Shittt I been dirty. On the roof wit 30.30s and real stealthy bitch.
So that means I take shots from afar.. nd I ain't talkin selfie sticks.
Fuck you lame. We been in the game and improving in chunks.
Well everybody Cept tic.. we all just hope your entire being gets dumped.
See where I'm from. Kids got guns and crack dealers try to con.
The last time you learned to Blast toys was gettin levels on ur pokemon.
Dude you're a fairy. Far from scary with ur crew lookin like some queens..
..Nigga you Kick it with more bitches than the US girls soccer team.
You could get mad. I'll just stab straight into ur little chest.
Your whole family'll mourn.. so it's obvi how my Ripple Affect.
@Tic

[Tic]

Will post in early AM if that's cool @iSpaz sorry, b. My home computer is broken and since copy and pasting doesn't work, much easier just to post from my work comp. Will Post by 930.

[iSpaz]

Cool brah

[Tic]

NC is full of queers like you, but you should stop cuz ya rep is thin
It's like each week ISpy a faggot and immediately hops into bed with him
He loves Role Playing Games w/ dudes & findin a few fags to feel...
The way he takes it in the Button Switch - You'd think he was driving the new Batmobile
Dude is a bitch, so trust these punches are harmin ya
One uppercut is all I need to put Eye in the Sky like a fuckin astronomer
I'll Take You By Surprise and trust when the gat bucks, you'll lose
Call it my Eye Opener when I give the trigger a Tap on ya head like duck duck goose
Ya girl says ya short on top, she wants my enormous cock
So I Open'er Up, Fold it Back & stuff it alllll in...Office Storage box
You & ya man's is dead kid, cuz my range w/ the can is endless
So when it comes to ya Team, I'll Pick You Off 1 by 1 like Andy Pettite
You'll never Bounce Back, so there's no way you'll win
2 choices: Either you Cuddyer sit out next round for making worse plays than him

[Hush]

Originally Posted by iSpaz

Ayy.

First I'll catch you alone. Then that fuckin chrome'll have you lit.
But there's no need to Draw it out... when my plan always been 'a tac, tic'.
Shittt I been dirty. On the roof wit 30.30s and real stealthy bitch.
So that means I take shots from afar.. nd I ain't talkin selfie sticks.
See where I'm from. Kids got guns and crack dealers try to con.
The last time you learned to Blast toys was gettin levels on ur pokemon.

I fux with ur style man, its codeine smooth. its laid back and statementish but dont come off as boring. ur word choices are good. some of the lines I didnt quote was cliche, like ur kick it bar was really old. u know how to nameplay just be more selective, all an all cool verse

Originally Posted by tic

I'll Take You By Surprise and trust when the gat bucks, you'll lose
Call it my Eye Opener when I give the trigger a Tap on ya head like duck duck goose

duck duck goose line was fire, wasnt feeling the rest of the verse. everything was overworded imho, and I dont mean the amount of syllable, i just mean how it read. iunno man. ur shit didnt resonate with me this week


v/spaz

[sral]

Looooool selfie sticks line was dope but I can see some hating on it for not attacking your opponent as such, I liked it though

Blast Toys was done by Conceited and I can't get past that to quote that line for you, rest was okay but nothing else really stood out for me


Tic: I wasn't a huge fan of the batmobile ish, I get the idea but "take it in the button switch" just seems like too much of a stretch to me lol

Dude is a bitch, so trust these punches are harmin ya
One uppercut is all I need to put Eye in the Sky like a fuckin astronomer
I'll Take You By Surprise and trust when the gat bucks, you'll lose
Call it my Eye Opener when I give the trigger a Tap on ya head like duck duck goose

thought they were solid back to back, rest lacked a little to me though and felt a bit flat

I got iSpaz winning here, slightly more consistent with shit I liked where Tic had ups and downs. close battle though, I can see this going either way depending on what ppl like

[fraze]

Originally Posted by iSpaz

First I'll catch you alone. Then that fuckin chrome'll have you lit.
But there's no need to Draw it out... when my plan always been 'a tac, tic'.
liked this. 'attack tic' is cool, but it suffers because you flipped the name with no explanation
Eagle eye. I'll send bullets flyin cause guns is what I still do.
So when I bang 10 Rounds.. it's just to prove I'll go the distance to kill you.
too simple.
Shittt I been dirty. On the roof wit 30.30s and real stealthy bitch.
So that means I take shots from afar.. nd I ain't talkin selfie sticks.
this was aight
Fuck you lame. We been in the game and improving in chunks.
Well everybody Cept tic.. we all just hope your entire being gets dumped.
cool concept. this could have been harsher in the punch. as worded its a little light
See where I'm from. Kids got guns and crack dealers try to con.
The last time you learned to Blast toys was gettin levels on ur pokemon.
haha i liked this, more pokebars.
Dude you're a fairy. Far from scary with ur crew lookin like some queens..
..Nigga you Kick it with more bitches than the US girls soccer team.
kinda straightforward and the diss relies on the setup, otherwise it would have been a complement. not a problem per se, but it makes it less harsh
You could get mad. I'll just stab straight into ur little chest.
Your whole family'll mourn.. so it's obvi how my Ripple Affect.
didnt set up a second meaning on ripple effect, otherwise this would have been dope

Originally Posted by Tic

NC is full of queers like you, but you should stop cuz ya rep is thin
It's like each week ISpy a faggot and immediately hops into bed with him
meh. this is a disappointing bar from you
He loves Role Playing Games w/ dudes & findin a few fags to feel...
The way he takes it in the Button Switch - You'd think he was driving the new Batmobile
meh again. concept is there but something feels off in the wording
Dude is a bitch, so trust these punches are harmin ya
One uppercut is all I need to put Eye in the Sky like a fuckin astronomer
this is liked. nice
I'll Take You By Surprise and trust when the gat bucks, you'll lose
Call it my Eye Opener when I give the trigger a Tap on ya head like duck duck goose
wordy punch. i would have said 'when bullets tap ya head...' or something to keep the flow smooth. otherwise cool
Ya girl says ya short on top, she wants my enormous cock
So I Open'er Up, Fold it Back & stuff it alllll in...Office Storage box
not feeling this
You & ya man's is dead kid, cuz my range w/ the can is endless
So when it comes to ya Team, I'll Pick You Off 1 by 1 like Andy Pettite
aight
You'll never Bounce Back, so there's no way you'll win
2 choices: Either you Cuddyer sit out next round for making worse plays than him
little obscure for me. but the wp is there

Eyespaz, you've been getting better every week. I see you working on the concepts and wording, and every verse is better than the one before. I liked selfie stick and blast toys. Cept tic and kick it with girls were close.

Tic, you didn't seem very motivated here and dropped a kinda mediocre verse (compared to previous work). I like eye in the sky and tap ya head. Few close bars, that I didn't like for sort of nitpicky reasons (so I won't count that too much against you).

Overrall Tic was slightly more consistent, but Spaz is getting close. Definitely can't fault anyone who votes the other way, cause I was impressed by some of the creativity you showed. But don't think it was quite enough to beat Tic.

Vote: Tic Tac

[~RustyGunZ~]

First I'll catch you alone. Then that fuckin chrome'll have you lit.
But there's no need to Draw it out... when my plan always been 'a tac, tic'.
eh
Eagle eye. I'll send bullets flyin cause guns is what I still do.
So when I bang 10 Rounds.. it's just to prove I'll go the distance to kill you.
eh
Shittt I been dirty. On the roof wit 30.30s and real stealthy bitch.
So that means I take shots from afar.. nd I ain't talkin selfie sticks.

Fuck you lame. We been in the game and improving in chunks.
Well everybody Cept tic.. we all just hope your entire being gets dumped.
bad wording, cool concept
See where I'm from. Kids got guns and crack dealers try to con.
The last time you learned to Blast toys was gettin levels on ur pokemon.
played
Dude you're a fairy. Far from scary with ur crew lookin like some queens..
..Nigga you Kick it with more bitches than the US girls soccer team.
nah
You could get mad. I'll just stab straight into ur little chest.
Your whole family'll mourn.. so it's obvi how my Ripple Affect.
cool cool

vs

NC is full of queers like you, but you should stop cuz ya rep is thin
It's like each week ISpy a faggot and immediately hops into bed with him
lol cool
He loves Role Playing Games w/ dudes & findin a few fags to feel...
The way he takes it in the Button Switch - You'd think he was driving the new Batmobile
okay
Dude is a bitch, so trust these punches are harmin ya
One uppercut is all I need to put Eye in the Sky like a fuckin astronomer
okay, better wording or a different delivery would have been advised
I'll Take You By Surprise and trust when the gat bucks, you'll lose
Call it my Eye Opener when I give the trigger a Tap on ya head like duck duck goose

Ya girl says ya short on top, she wants my enormous cock
So I Open'er Up, Fold it Back & stuff it alllll in...Office Storage box
nah
You & ya man's is dead kid, cuz my range w/ the can is endless
So when it comes to ya Team, I'll Pick You Off 1 by 1 like Andy Pettite
okay
You'll never Bounce Back, so there's no way you'll win
2 choices: Either you Cuddyer sit out next round for making worse plays than him
eh

spaz had a super played line otherwise okay, tic was consistently eh except a few

best were duck duck goose and selfie stick

v/tic

[Bust]

Spaz

Opener, selfie sticks lol, n closer

I liked those a lot


Tic

Opener, duck duck goose lol, Andy Pettite

Those were cool

Idk this is tight man tuff call, pretty even all around but damn I think I enjoyed spaz a tad more here.. Shut had to go over it a few times but yeah I got tad with harsher quotes here.. Nice read guys..

Vote spaz

[Greed]

First I'll catch you alone. Then that fuckin chrome'll have you lit.
But there's no need to Draw it out... when my plan always been 'a tac, tic'.
Cool

Eagle eye. I'll send bullets flyin cause guns is what I still do.
So when I bang 10 Rounds.. it's just to prove I'll go the distance to kill you.
Slick

Shittt I been dirty. On the roof wit 30.30s and real stealthy bitch.
So that means I take shots from afar.. nd I ain't talkin selfie sticks.
Heater

Fuck you lame. We been in the game and improving in chunks.
Well everybody Cept tic.. we all just hope your entire being gets dumped.
Heh okay

See where I'm from. Kids got guns and crack dealers try to con.
The last time you learned to Blast toys was gettin levels on ur pokemon.
Ha okay

Dude you're a fairy. Far from scary with ur crew lookin like some queens..
..Nigga you Kick it with more bitches than the US girls soccer team.
Solid

You could get mad. I'll just stab straight into ur little chest.
Your whole family'll mourn.. so it's obvi how my Ripple Affect.
Okay close



NC is full of queers like you, but you should stop cuz ya rep is thin
It's like each week ISpy a faggot and immediately hops into bed with him
Nah it doesnt work

He loves Role Playing Games w/ dudes & findin a few fags to feel...
The way he takes it in the Button Switch - You'd think he was driving the new Batmobile
Lol okay

Dude is a bitch, so trust these punches are harmin ya
One uppercut is all I need to put Eye in the Sky like a fuckin astronomer
I dont know if astronomer should have been the connection for this. Wasnt awful.

I'll Take You By Surprise and trust when the gat bucks, you'll lose
Call it my Eye Opener when I give the trigger a Tap on ya head like duck duck goose
Lackluster finish

Ya girl says ya short on top, she wants my enormous cock
So I Open'er Up, Fold it Back & stuff it alllll in...Office Storage box
Lol this was weak.

You & ya man's is dead kid, cuz my range w/ the can is endless
So when it comes to ya Team, I'll Pick You Off 1 by 1 like Andy Pettite
Ehh

You'll never Bounce Back, so there's no way you'll win
2 choices: Either you Cuddyer sit out next round for making worse plays than him
Okay


You been on a hot streak tic niggas aint taking you lightly so you cant slack.

V spaz

[Ronin]

I got spazs opener, selfie stick, cept tic could've been fire if it had better wording in the punch, ripple effect would've been better with a diff structure.

Opener was nice, I like button switch, eye in thebsky was nice, duck duck goose nice...after it kinda fell off for me.

This was a nice battle, enjoyable read but I got tic taking it in a good one

Vote tic

[Allen Knight]

Shittt I been dirty. On the roof wit 30.30s and real stealthy bitch.
So that means I take shots from afar.. nd I ain't talkin selfie sticks.
Fuck you lame. We been in the game and improving in chunks.
Well everybody Cept tic.. we all just hope your entire being gets dumped.


Vs


NC is full of queers like you, but you should stop cuz ya rep is thin
It's like each week ISpy a faggot and immediately hops into bed with him
I'll Take You By Surprise and trust when the gat bucks, you'll lose
Call it my Eye Opener when I give the trigger a Tap on ya head like duck duck goose

V/tic, yo this was dumb close shit, had to re-read, spaz stepped it up
& finally showed he got bars like i kno he has, but i think tic won cuz he had LOTB
its tied in quotes but that duck duck goose line was fire...def a sick battle i liked this jawn, & it could go either way tbh , props yah'll dope shit

[Sharp]

Shittt I been dirty. On the roof wit 30.30s and real stealthy bitch.
So that means I take shots from afar.. nd I ain't talkin selfie sticks.
Fuck you lame. We been in the game and improving in chunks.
Well everybody Cept tic.. we all just hope your entire being gets dumped.
See where I'm from. Kids got guns and crack dealers try to con.
The last time you learned to Blast toys was gettin levels on ur pokemon.

ripple was almost. good verse, I think this is that sudden improvement I been saying is coming tbh




He loves Role Playing Games w/ dudes & findin a few fags to feel...
The way he takes it in the Button Switch - You'd think he was driving the new Batmobile
I'll Take You By Surprise and trust when the gat bucks, you'll lose
Call it my Eye Opener when I give the trigger a Tap on ya head like duck duck goose

and a few near quotes

I got spaz with one more quote. Close tho, dope battle and it took me a few reads to make up my mind

v/spaz


5-4 spaz

[Allen Knight]

UPPPIN 5-4 SPAZ

[El Muffin]

Spaz

A tac tic just read weird to m3 wasn't feeling it
10 rds/ go the distance. Oh shit lol
selfies sticks nice
septic was fresh but the syllables suck idc this was nice
blast toys. Lol nah I mean it's Pok


Wow more cutoffs?


Dude I had

Selfies st8cks/septic/10 rds/ripple aleffect

Vsbatmobile n Andy petite (lotb)

Tics opener /duck duck goose n fold were foolish

Especially the opener

But Noone says there going to let a trigger tap you on the head. Shit hss to mske sense. N then the origami rape the line after that kinda annoyed me too

Ima opener up/fold it back /stuff it all inside ? Lmao sounds stupid. Gone @fold it back

Yeah I got spaz man. I had gripes about tics verse this wk for suuuuure

V/spaz gw

[Amen.]

10 rounds
cept tic was cool

vs

iSpy was ok
eye opener was ok but wordy

close battle, a lot of misses on both ends but I think TIC edges the shit barely.

Tic got it