R. 2: Certain vs. Mr. J - (Mr. J wins)

Geno · 06-15-2015, 12:05 PM

Certain came nasty. Good showing of a horse race. Technicals are dope as usual and had that nasty certain format all around. Only problem i had was that its really hard to elaborate much on a horse race and kind of leaves you at a loss for creativity and unpredictability.

Mr j
Told the cowboy story..
Obvious approach as well as certai s was.. bug this gave a much wider realm for you to operate on and get more in depth. Thought you edged this because of the route certain took. Hes writi g s a bit better imo.. bu i think you captured the topic in a more defined manner. So this was really close

But i got mr.j
V/12

06-15-2015, 12:05 PM	#9
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Certain came nasty. Good showing of a horse race. Technicals are dope as usual and had that nasty certain format all around. Only problem i had was that its really hard to elaborate much on a horse race and kind of leaves you at a loss for creativity and unpredictability. Mr j Told the cowboy story.. Obvious approach as well as certai s was.. bug this gave a much wider realm for you to operate on and get more in depth. Thought you edged this because of the route certain took. Hes writi g s a bit better imo.. bu i think you captured the topic in a more defined manner. So this was really close But i got mr.j V/12 __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

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