R. 2: CopyPat vs. UnbornBuddha - (UnbornBuddha wins)

[Mr. J]

Ok...well this was an even match up of the week

Copy, I really enjoy your work for the most part, you are a well rounded writer
and this piece shined quite well for the simplicity of how it's put together
you still capture the essence of the pic, and really take it upon yourself to write.
This is the Copy that I enjoy, it may have been a rushed verse but it's still dope
you add enough depth to the character to make the topic stand out as its read
so you had that going, I think with a little more technical aspect you'd grow
either way nice work here dude...

Unborn, What can I say man, this was well suited to your set of skills
the way that you shine on such a piece shows your skills at their best
i also enjoy an Unborn verse whether it's thought enough for the OM
or if it's a throwaway in the Cypher, you have the ability to go unmatched by most
Obviously this battle was in your favor, the topic fits you like it would no other
and although I do love that about you, make sure to branch out on your expertise
make something that compliments your style but doesn't follow the same formula
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Anyway fella's I always enjoy watching two of my subjects step out the realm of the OM & grow as they take on subjects that are different from their usual material..you two have shined and I appreciate the read fella's

v/Unborn