Devotion to script (personal made public)

Mike Wrecka · 04-18-2013, 09:05 PM

dope. a lot of emotion put into this piece. true story huh? seemed like it.
flow wise it was ok, but you had a strong use of words

and i'm not here for preaching ill leave that to hypocrits in the synagogs
not very religious, too much corruption in the world for me to believe in god
this is a collection of thoughts brought on by me connecting the dots
if they say we're ALL sinners then definitely my perception of heaven is off.
this has now became my injection of raw, unfiltered and sincerest emotions
now that i let it out on the page i dont care if you even feed it or quote it.

best part. good stuff . pz

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04-18-2013, 09:05 PM	#1
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	dope. a lot of emotion put into this piece. true story huh? seemed like it. flow wise it was ok, but you had a strong use of words and i'm not here for preaching ill leave that to hypocrits in the synagogs not very religious, too much corruption in the world for me to believe in god this is a collection of thoughts brought on by me connecting the dots if they say we're ALL sinners then definitely my perception of heaven is off. this has now became my injection of raw, unfiltered and sincerest emotions now that i let it out on the page i dont care if you even feed it or quote it. best part. good stuff . pz