Twenty One vs. Utmost {Utmost wins}

Dominate · 04-18-2013, 05:56 PM

Glee was ok attempt... Wording is the big thing letting you down. Gotta make it crisp, and with a clear punch and wp if you use it. Punched with a heater was your best worded bar. Keep dropping

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Head in the clouds was cool, good wording/set up, def fuckin 5 was lol, cool... Twenty in a clip and working girl were both decent, and I didn't catch the closer. Your wording and flips are really good and often turn a concept that's just OK into something pretty decent, well done.

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04-18-2013, 05:56 PM	#10
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,533 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197460	Glee was ok attempt... Wording is the big thing letting you down. Gotta make it crisp, and with a clear punch and wp if you use it. Punched with a heater was your best worded bar. Keep dropping Vs Head in the clouds was cool, good wording/set up, def fuckin 5 was lol, cool... Twenty in a clip and working girl were both decent, and I didn't catch the closer. Your wording and flips are really good and often turn a concept that's just OK into something pretty decent, well done. Vote utmost