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HE / HIM / FRAC
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: PA
Posts: 11,592
Battle Record: 56-21
Accomplishments - 50+ Wins
Champed - The Ultimate Writer
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Nobody battles- Crack jokes & laugh, it's what they happen to do
And now I'm part of them too since I learned I was battling you what It's been so long, still, I'm killing this dweeb How could I lose to someone named after what Indians eat// ok you've found the potential for a flip now you have to use it a little more effectively That's nonsense- It doesn't matter what you say now All that shit is played out, even saying that shit is played out I dont follow Please, take that smirk off, homie don't be lacking Guarantee that smile ain't the only thing that's cracking// you're flipping an idiom which is good but you can expand on that idea a lil more if it makes it hit This is like a mosh pit with bombs bitch, don't step to me man Cuz I'll put a slash in your throat & make room for the rest of the band actually thought this was good not terrible. I suspect this was a 'hes not showing' keystyle but if you want me to elaborate pm me |
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