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Also I'd like to add as advice- there was immense potential for really painting a picture after that line I was drooling over, so it was frustrating to see you lapse back into dialogue or typical Zen shit about maybe contacting exes. I feel like as a writer, you could really move past that phase with the literal details of your writing, without abandoning those driving emotions or finding new muses. I'm waiting for you to explore these things on a new, deeper level without treading water with your words
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