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04-30-2015, 10:22 PM
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Damn bro this was a really enjoyable read. You certainly have evolved/ elevated. Very impressive. Your verses come off as effortless streams of consciousness . This type of internal reflection can sometimes come off forced or can get boring quickly but this was really engaging. Some really beautiful phrases used here. Great job
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