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Old 04-09-2015, 06:12 PM   #1
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This..

carry trinkets from an age sponsored by old wives tales
of course I'm a beast, I banished Titans til the white flags sail..


This..

Peter Parker the way I keep a marker, snap shots at you suckers
I swear they don't see the damage I do, must be a blues brother
I told em' "BITCH I'M RAW" in that case I don't even use rubbers
snatch the serpentine spit, then I flex the way that Hercules did..

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I really admire your style of writing and word choice/rhymes. Very off kilt and not generic. I liked the subject matter as well. Nice written Mr. J
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