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Just Write · 04-17-2013, 02:21 PM

damn split this was nice. very well written. this to a league or just free write? you have a style that ive never seen before. love your word usage and the syllable writing.. theae few lines stood out to me

woke up drowning in nosebleeds. afloat in parapraxis,counting rosary beads of dreams i've but only contracted.cuz when the punchline arrives, you'll be groping for another.LOVE has become the only buzzword. uselessly cluttered.

ball bearings rolling in thunder of silence.oh, you'll be regaled. solemn poems recited.honestly, who realized the last nail in the coffinwould be a keratin claw bawling for oxygen?take a drag of the toxins. hype-induced confusion,as the contaminant saturates the appropriate nooses,

just buttery perfection. stay up. keep droppin shit like this and ill keep reading. peace

04-17-2013, 02:21 PM	#3
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	damn split this was nice. very well written. this to a league or just free write? you have a style that ive never seen before. love your word usage and the syllable writing.. theae few lines stood out to me woke up drowning in nosebleeds. afloat in parapraxis,counting rosary beads of dreams i've but only contracted.cuz when the punchline arrives, you'll be groping for another.LOVE has become the only buzzword. uselessly cluttered. ball bearings rolling in thunder of silence.oh, you'll be regaled. solemn poems recited.honestly, who realized the last nail in the coffinwould be a keratin claw bawling for oxygen?take a drag of the toxins. hype-induced confusion,as the contaminant saturates the appropriate nooses, just buttery perfection. stay up. keep droppin shit like this and ill keep reading. peace __________________

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