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03-25-2015, 02:33 AM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
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This one reminded me of Rakim's "The Punisher," for better or worse. The violence level was turned up to a level that seemed cartoonish without your usual sense of tongue-in-cheek humor. You obviously have the rhyming aspect down, but I look for a little more humor or insight. There also was this:
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