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Old 03-12-2015, 04:36 PM   #1
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Sitting here for like 10 minutes trying to think of a name flip to embarrass ya
It's like all bags lines come out corny.. but I guess that's just your character
^well. idk. kiiiinda decent, but then u use a bags line in ur verse, and that's kinda counterproductive to say they're corny then.
u KNOW u can't talk about guns, hitting bitches or winnin scraps
If u ever submit a arm bar, I'll have u do that faster then a rousey match
^idea is rly cool. execution was a little off. coulda been fire tho. rhyme was lazy
Ima real 1, i can talk pussy cause I spit crack game kid
All the conversations u have about muff lead to angry rants and avatar changes
^muff/pussy feels pretty old. otherwise, decent current events line. rhyme felt forced tho
Ur life is clearly a mess, and ur bitch physique is grotesque
Bags always be on her head, but not cause he keeping her in check
^rhyme felt forced again. u coulda just said 'keeps her in check' to make the syllables match. otherwise, the line felt some what old, but i never seen this flip before, so i'mma give u the benefit of the doubt.
Bitch look like kimbo, and ur video in the hush thread had me leaned
No hoes, this homo guile fuck a street fighter to the chun li theme
^meh. didn't like the rhyme either. seems like u coulda done more with this concept.

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I dont gotta call him a fag or talk on the facts....
He get mauled in the ass...if greed knos no bounds...wats w the ball an the gag?
^lol
Im smokin stinky, gold on pinky..u kno...roll on twinkies
An im swole times 50 ... King of the spring? FAGOT ... ill turn u to a broken slinky
^lol. not necessarily a great line, but i thought it was funny
Bitches? U guys r insane...out ur mind an ya brain
Lyin ass lame. pryde turned to greed an still dont got a fuckin dime to his name.
^okay i guess. execution was good, concept meh
Homie u ben fake...U in arizona? WOAH. Check mate!
I aint large pro but yo G lets say ....i ain heard anything dope outta AZ in over a decade
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Nigger. U try to buy sum garbage speakers an bargain cheaper
dark ass tweeker. Ur a worthless token that cant even pay for the parkin meter
^dece

well, bags got it w/ his first 2 lines. plus he had waay crisper wording and all of his shit hit harder cuza that.
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u KNOW u can't talk about guns, hitting bitches or winnin scraps
If u ever submit a arm bar, I'll have u do that faster then a rousey match
Ima real 1, i can talk pussy cause I spit crack game kid
All the conversations u have about muff lead to angry rants and avatar changes

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I dont gotta call him a fag or talk on the facts....
He get mauled in the ass...if greed knos no bounds...wats w the ball an the gag?
Im smokin stinky, gold on pinky..u kno...roll on twinkies
An im swole times 50 ... King of the spring? FAGOT ... ill turn u to a broken slinky

Vote Bags. His verse was overall more creative and better worded. AZ line maqde me chuckle but not quote worthy. Greed had a couple serious misses as well
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