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King Karaoke & Unfukwitable
I bodied Muff with personals, I dug under every layer Hasn't won a match since, he battled Amen & didn't even stand a prayer Decent setup, Decent Personal here… punch was ok… 2.5/5 I'm using the cleaver or the butcher knife, you can take your pick Either way that hacking'll leave more people terrified than the James Franco flick Another decent setup… punch was there.. needed worded better for full impact but it landed nonetheless. 3/5 My wardrobe is impeccable, I come thru the club draped in fur If a chick ever calls you Sharper, it's because you tried raping her The setup was self hype… when it comes to the punch I see the concept ur going for but it needed worded better bro… this one didn’t land for me… 2/5 Bishop you're wack, me trying to get rid of you during the draft wasn't petty son But it makes sense why they call you Blanco since we've never seen u black on anyone Went for a nameflip.. it was like a light jab.. nothing hard.. but it was a nameflip.. 2.5/5 Yall post lame shit, how can Me & Kar honor u queers, When the only thing u know about deadly drops is what the Dr. gave Dom for his ear. setup was good thought I was gonna see a haymaker but got disappointed quick when I read the punchline… 2/5 Yall give off that Female aura, I ain't tryna deal with that shit today, If I wanted to be around Bitch made presence, Hush's Xmas thread is just a click away. haha this gave me a chuckle here… good wordplay.. this landed hard… 3.5/5 Bish's crater face ass is pure talk and no action, it's no surprize, That this dude is All bark when his skin looks like a mixture of Oak &Pine. went at a personal.. didn’t land well IMO… decent setup though.. 2/5 Muff's stress is building up, But my advice for his needy ass; Is don't let life take a toll on u, when this revolver could be a EZ pass Concept was cool.. I like the EZ pass reference with the toll part… this could have been a KO punch if worded right.. props… 3/5 Muff & Blanco Bishop Kar so what you have two jobs? That don't change ya dummy thinks money'll gettim face n pussy but Kar a pussy who won't show his face for money This was simplistic to me… you tried to get complex with it an flip it around but it didn’t work in your favor.. decent personal though.. wording is off.. 2/5 What the hell did you say? U not baggin MY bitch. She can tell ur just gay Shit if you see Caretaker'..it because we left you battered and in need of medical aid Set up ok… punch was cool.. it didn’t land reall hard though… 2.5/5 unfuk that shit u pulled in 1-2 was nuts n shameful your not joining Nbl till week 7? considering it takes you a full wk to write one punch ion fkn blame u Haha grimey personal here… I get what your going for.. this was good… 3/5Un post from the library. The ppl adjacent to him laugh at this bum he's on such a shoestring budget but it costs nothing to hang himself w/ a noose fashioned from one haha again with a humorous bar… shoestring noose nice concept… this landed… 3/5 keep them trash rhymes to yourself! W/ that display ull never earn the dub Treat your raps like a colostomy bag...cover it up and only Show ur Shit to the ones you love Grimey concept again… the colostomy bag concept hit hard… setup was tied into it… nice.. 3.5/5 king Kara's an troubled autocrat who hasn't had sex n awhile funny watching King try to hold court when he's facing charges for molesting a child This concept was ok… it just needed worded better.. setup really didn’t do nothing for me.. 2/5 I met Kar. He's got 5 bitches so im like "yea lets teaar it up" This nigga said eeeny meeny miney moe n 4 midgets came out the woodworks prepared to fuck This was bad… not a good bar at all… def fell off here.. admit it was funny doe… 1.5/5 I said where's the 5th. He glanced at UN. Uns "you bastard, ME?" "I made my name unfukwitable so ppl would no longer think I give out ass for free!" Another humorous bar… but it didn’t land hard at all.. nice try at a name flip though… 2/5 Karaoke & Unfukwitable: 20.5/40 Muff & Blanco Bishop: 19.5/40 Vote: Karaoke & Unfukwitable All parties involved need to utilize your setups. Throw a jab or two in the setups as well. Give them the 2 piece then the haymaker. Seen some simple rhyme schemes in here.. no mulites really.. I seen some decent concepts though just wasn’t executed to full potential. Set down and word them better. Yall had time to write these bars they should of came off harder and more direct then what they did. Props though to all involved. Keep writing… Keep Battling!!
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I'm using the cleaver or the butcher knife, you can take your pick
Either way that hacking'll leave more people terrified than the James Franco flick Yall post lame shit, how can Me & Kar honor u queers, When the only thing u know about deadly drops is what the Dr. gave Dom for his ear. Yall give off that Female aura, I ain't tryna deal with that shit today, If I wanted to be around Bitch made presence, Hush's Xmas thread is just a click away. Bish's crater face ass is pure talk and no action, it's no surprize, That this dude is All bark when his skin looks like a mixture of Oak &Pine. Muff's stress is building up, But my advice for his needy ass; Is don't let life take a toll on u, when this revolver could be a EZ pass. Kar so what you have two jobs? That don't change ya dummy thinks money'll gettim face n pussy but Kar a pussy who won't show his face for money Un post from the library. The ppl adjacent to him laugh at this bum he's on such a shoestring budget but it costs nothing to hang himself w/ a noose fashioned from one keep them trash rhymes to yourself! W/ that display ull never earn the dub Treat your raps like a colostomy bag...cover it up and only Show ur Shit to the ones you love king Kara's an troubled autocrat who hasn't had sex n awhile funny watching King try to hold court when he's facing charges for molesting a child I got an extra line from Kar/Un. Close, i'm pretty sure Muff wrote the whole verse himself and didn't have the consistency needed to take it. Lot of played/old stuff like care-kar and a Daren Sharper line but still cool battle, Kar and Un got it for me v/Karaoke and Unfuckwitable |
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and cause the one vote was questionable i'm leaving this open
but if there's no more votes by tomorrow night I'll close it |
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@Unfukwitable @King Karaoke
Congrats, not sure what Defiant and broke had in mind but you guys will get a free shot at 1 BA title of your choice |
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