hey there, lonely.

Inno · 02-22-2015, 06:08 PM

we became addicts. I smoking your breath till we turned into ashes.

that was, some outstanding imagery my friend. the smoothness of each word next
each other is just flawless. this was dope. I love that you structure your pieces the wsy you do
makes them feel unique and original at least to me anyway. this one had great creative imagery
in background of your story. and tbh your style is very zen lol. each read no matter the plot
reads like butter milk pancakes yo. dope piece man.

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02-22-2015, 06:08 PM	#3
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	we became addicts. I smoking your breath till we turned into ashes. that was, some outstanding imagery my friend. the smoothness of each word next each other is just flawless. this was dope. I love that you structure your pieces the wsy you do makes them feel unique and original at least to me anyway. this one had great creative imagery in background of your story. and tbh your style is very zen lol. each read no matter the plot reads like butter milk pancakes yo. dope piece man.