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Old 02-22-2015, 01:21 PM   #4
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Bow to your Sensei ha! That shit was nice. I would say some of your transitions to different rhyme schemes were a little rusty, but once you got started with them you got going really good. This is some nice braggadocio type of shit. I dig it.

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