objective - ok cool. short sweet and to the point. cant say i didnt enjoy it. flow was nice and you made a strong case in a limited space, which makes your piece even more impressive. the ending brought the piece to a nice close. similiar to the last piece i voted on, i really dont have much to say, except for cool piece but will it be ambitious enough to take down keith?
keith - i liked the first two stanzas, and the opening line was profound and strong, and well worded. however as the piece continued i feel as though you did not tie up your topic as nicely as objective. malcolm x and public enemy are not entities i would exactly consider 'underground'. as a matter of fact their historical significance is enormous. the flow sort of fell off, but the imagery remained strong. however, the piece ultimately left my questioning your stance more than agreeing with, whereas objective kept my head nodding
v - objective, for keeping my head nodding
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04-15-2013, 11:17 PM
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