AOWL CHAMPIONSHIP: Zygote (6-2) vs. Mike Wrecka (5-3) [ZYGOTE WINS, 11-0.]

[IamBenT]

Nice battle. Imma switch things up this week and instead of looking for quotes i liked, imma put up quotes I DIDN'T LIKE.

Alright.

Zygote- Damn, what a dope allegory. From top to bottom I was enthralled with your epic take on mythmaking. This is the best verse I have read from you in my time here, bar none. you have real solid skill in dropping these strong short verses, and it really worked for you this week. rhyme scheme was effective and constant throughout with few slip ups.

Asphyxiating and constricting as it races upwards,
Twisting and slithering, the vine changed the others

didnt like, just ugly and seemed kind of forced. it slapped me in the middle of an otherwise fantastic reading experience

Mike Wrecka - Great name by the way. I think this is the first verse I have read and bro I gotta say next to Nigma you have the dopest flow and skill with multis in the league. Where others such as myself force, you flow, and i love that. Relevance to topic was sketchy at best, you could have hit more on the uselessness of God, seemed like an afterthought at the end of the verse, you should have hit me up with a PM cuz i debate these atheists at RM all the time, and they have tons of vitriol and great fodder for a verse like this that I think COULD have meshed with the love story. I love a good love story *hence my verse this week* so I did appreciate that.

were livin life to the fullest, fulfilling our dreams,
heaven is on a place called earth, that's what happiness brings/

Just didn't like this line. felt like it interrupted the flow and messed things up a bit, plus a bit vague and could have been reworded.

Vote -Zygote for a great verse. Great battle guys!