Ok.. this one goes hard to the paint like moving still-life's

[Mitch]

got swerve appeal y'all niggas urkle still
I sit back observe females just to see the thirst is real, //
we train hoes it's nothing, have your tone adjusted
sex my cuzzin slut n never disrespect the 2nd coming, //
Intersections gunning pedal pumping
pulling up in gas stations pumping gas sitting on sum twenty something's, //
metalical stare impair ya vision that's from the glare"

the flow was really good here. you should write more like this. i wasn't rly into the rest, but it was alright. a lot of shit went over my head in the second paragraph so idk.