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Old 01-06-2015, 03:08 AM   #7
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definitely. when you pose a grander narrative, it broadens the audience that can capture, but catastrophically narrows an emotional connectivity. The shorter lines were reminiscent of Zen, but the key difference is narrative. He'd tell you a story, a bit philosophical, but will digest on the basis that it is....an observation! A lesson! Here it was broad and spoke to anybody, which is good! I liked it.
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