AOWL Week 9: Nigma (4-2) vs. Xces (1-0) [XCES WINS, 6-5.]

Zen · 04-14-2013, 02:28 PM

Damn good battle you two.
Nigma: Great verse really. I took as a soldier arguing within himself on whether he should continue to fight or not as he sees all the destruction around him. You dropped this with your trademark style and it kept out very well with my only hiccup being the wet dream line. It seemed oddly worded but besides that a great piece.
Xces: Wow. Great piece. I love the quotes you have in between your stanzas I think it worked well to tie the entire piece together and the line about the person in control has no control at all described the piece perfectly. Those who try to control everything only end up destroying everything. You've also got a great rhyme scheme. Great work here.

Overall this battle is close and I think it'll come down to the wire but I gotta go with Xces here.

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04-14-2013, 02:28 PM	#1
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Damn good battle you two. Nigma: Great verse really. I took as a soldier arguing within himself on whether he should continue to fight or not as he sees all the destruction around him. You dropped this with your trademark style and it kept out very well with my only hiccup being the wet dream line. It seemed oddly worded but besides that a great piece. Xces: Wow. Great piece. I love the quotes you have in between your stanzas I think it worked well to tie the entire piece together and the line about the person in control has no control at all described the piece perfectly. Those who try to control everything only end up destroying everything. You've also got a great rhyme scheme. Great work here. Overall this battle is close and I think it'll come down to the wire but I gotta go with Xces here.