A Story of Love in a Frozen Hell

Mitch · 12-14-2014, 04:16 PM

i liked this, some of the speech in quotes was kinda weird, but other than that it was all good, and some of the speech was rly good like the dying in the wilderness rhyme went rly well and sounded real. my favourite paragraph was the second one about the fire. From start to ending i loved that paragraph, the titanic line was nice, but u described the fire and panic rly well.

12-14-2014, 04:16 PM	#5
Mitch Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Canada Posts: 160 Rep Power: 2208351	i liked this, some of the speech in quotes was kinda weird, but other than that it was all good, and some of the speech was rly good like the dying in the wilderness rhyme went rly well and sounded real. my favourite paragraph was the second one about the fire. From start to ending i loved that paragraph, the titanic line was nice, but u described the fire and panic rly well. __________________ Soundcloud.com/TheDirtySerpent

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