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12-14-2014, 02:43 PM
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I think if e worked on his wording he would be dope. With that being said his wording through it off for me. Swerve had jazz hands and morn with the shotgun punch.
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12-14-2014, 06:57 PM
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E u should construct ur setups to tie in more with the punches. Your wording was a little archaic me...like your concepts tho.
Swerve had orcs tat..Jazz hands V swerve |
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12-14-2014, 09:47 PM
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Hi...
Swerve had some unusually corny lines like the orc line and Drake line but the rest was dope... E had the masters on and shameless line which were fire... Shameless line should be a top line in this week's mag... But I think you got lazy on the other lines... Swerve was more consistent... Vote/swerve... Bye...
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