Cashius 1-0 Vs Storyteller 1-0 - CASHIUS WINS

Allen Knight · 12-08-2014, 01:32 PM

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread

First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Cashius @Storyteller

Spoken · 12-08-2014, 05:47 PM

Check

Cashius · 12-08-2014, 06:12 PM

10.

Spoken · 12-10-2014, 01:59 AM

10 sent to sharp

Spoken · 12-10-2014, 07:40 AM

Everything and then some? Rejection is what u boast,
Have this match transfered to AWOL how a topical head beating u w/ these notes
If he claim he a beast then I'll have this animal slaughtered as payment,
Yall wud think im against animal rights da way'll have cashmere all on the pavement.
Get ya whistle wet? Pft. U try hard to be part of circles shit even groupies,
Act tuff N I'll hit ya blindside till u earn a casting spot on that movie.
Cash as frail as used bills one punch'll have his whole career shelved,
Cus ur bars are like karps FYI thread, how they stay crying for help!
See ur bars like brokes disappearin' act at the most,
Put the working to jokes how I muff em' while ur verses look like one of his votes.

Cashius · 12-10-2014, 11:01 AM

No thanks.

Cashius · 12-11-2014, 10:18 PM

You're nothing so just stop. Girls hate you..ain't sucking on your cock, son
If a bitch goes into a building with multiple Story's...she's jumping off the top one
You see me walking around with dimes...it probably hurts, my dude
Cause the closest you came to a chick on your arm is copying Orc's tattoo
Don't wanna hear how you're honestly grossing bucks...We already know you suck
If you're ever close to a fortune, Teller...they're saying you'll always be broke as fuck
One hook is dentin' your face, kid...He's shook, the prick is just basic
Peeped your record...
All I see is your numbers going down...it's like I'm looking into the Matrix
It's the end of your life when I render the knife....more than felonies get copped
But don't worry...the grave site's on me. Cause every good StoryTeller needs a plot

Swerve · 12-11-2014, 11:27 PM

Everything and then some? Rejection is what u boast,
Have this match transfered to AWOL how a topical head beating u w/ these notes
nah
If he claim he a beast then I'll have this animal slaughtered as payment,
Yall wud think im against animal rights da way'll have cashmere all on the pavement.
I pronounce cashmere "cash-mere", not really "cash-smear"
Get ya whistle wet? Pft. U try hard to be part of circles shit even groupies,
Act tuff N I'll hit ya blindside till u earn a casting spot on that movie.
Been done
Cash as frail as used bills one punch'll have his whole career shelved,
Cus ur bars are like karps FYI thread, how they stay crying for help!
alright
See ur bars like brokes disappearin' act at the most,
Put the working to jokes how I muff em' while ur verses look like one of his votes.
alright

vs.

You're nothing so just stop. Girls hate you..ain't sucking on your cock, son
If a bitch goes into a building with multiple Story's...she's jumping off the top one
Nice
You see me walking around with dimes...it probably hurts, my dude
Cause the closest you came to a chick on your arm is copying Orc's tattoo
I did this hours before you, you get no credit
Don't wanna hear how you're honestly grossing bucks...We already know you suck
If you're ever close to a fortune, Teller...they're saying you'll always be broke as fuck
Eh
One hook is dentin' your face, kid...He's shook, the prick is just basic
Peeped your record...
All I see is your numbers going down...it's like I'm looking into the Matrix
Solid, but seen similar
It's the end of your life when I render the knife....more than felonies get copped
But don't worry...the grave site's on me. Cause every good StoryTeller needs a plot
Solid

I really wanted to break this down line by line to tell @Cashius that I did the orc tattoo line earlier today in my battle....bitch :P. But I had cash here. Story started picking it up at the end, but the inconsistency really hurt him for me. I got Cash taking it.

V/ Cashius

Vulgar · 12-13-2014, 07:49 PM

Cashius outclassed Storyteller here. I didn't really like anything Story put forth, the disses had no sting. Cashius had a witty first bar, and I also kind of liked the Matrix line.

Vote - Cashius

Destroyer · 12-13-2014, 10:09 PM

cashmere was almost there

cash had fortune teller and matrix line
just overall more consistent

v/cashius

Orc · 12-14-2014, 06:59 AM

i liked every single Cash bar. i feel like a fangirl. it all hit tho tbh. chick on my arm bar was a nice flip i was gonna use but u and swerve got there first. storyteller, have a look at how Cash words his shit. it's sort of basic but in a good way, you're trying too hard to emulate the greats but if u just write stuff that's concise, simple, & hard you'll be way more consistent a la Cashius.

Cash got it

jilti · 12-14-2014, 08:42 AM

Storyteller had blindside

Cashius had an overall solid verse. Fortune Teller lotb

V-cash

kami · 12-14-2014, 02:54 PM

Liked cashmere and muff vote lines, but cash killed this with fortune teller and multiple story's.

Vote Cash

Allen Knight · 12-14-2014, 04:38 PM

You're nothing so just stop. Girls hate you..ain't sucking on your cock, son
If a bitch goes into a building with multiple Story's...she's jumping off the top one
^^^Dope
It's the end of your life when I render the knife....more than felonies get copped
But don't worry...the grave site's on me. Cause every good StoryTeller needs a plot

Vs

Cash as frail as used bills one punch'll have his whole career shelved,
Cus ur bars are like karps FYI thread, how they stay crying for help!

V/Cash, story u need to work on ur wording an making it harsher...keep battling
dawg u'll get there, cash was just better here, opener was dope, cool solid verse.
props to both.

Blanco Bishop · 12-14-2014, 05:49 PM

Muff vote

Vs

Closer n matrix

Cash was stronger with the direct quotes. St used a lot of wp that's already been used on cash.

V cash

King Karaoke · 12-14-2014, 09:54 PM

Hi...

That cashmere line was fire...
I've never seen that used against him before...
But the rest of your verse wasn't as hard hitting...
First four from cash weren't impressive...
Matrix and closer were solid...
Vote-cash for being more consistent...

Bye....

12-08-2014, 01:32 PM	#1
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Cashius 1-0 Vs Storyteller 1-0 - CASHIUS WINS Netcees Battle League Season VIII Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes Good luck! @Cashius @Storyteller __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

12-08-2014, 05:47 PM	#2
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	Check __________________ WP Po'ethics

12-10-2014, 01:59 AM	#4
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	10 sent to sharp __________________ WP Po'ethics Last edited by Spoken; 12-10-2014 at 02:02 AM.

12-10-2014, 07:40 AM	#5
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	Everything and then some? Rejection is what u boast, Have this match transfered to AWOL how a topical head beating u w/ these notes If he claim he a beast then I'll have this animal slaughtered as payment, Yall wud think im against animal rights da way'll have cashmere all on the pavement. Get ya whistle wet? Pft. U try hard to be part of circles shit even groupies, Act tuff N I'll hit ya blindside till u earn a casting spot on that movie. Cash as frail as used bills one punch'll have his whole career shelved, Cus ur bars are like karps FYI thread, how they stay crying for help! See ur bars like brokes disappearin' act at the most, Put the working to jokes how I muff em' while ur verses look like one of his votes. __________________ WP Po'ethics

12-11-2014, 11:27 PM	#8
Swerve SDub Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,874 Battle Record: 40-34 Champed - Alias Tourney III (Heroes vs. Villians) - Fight Night LXIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 64920327	Everything and then some? Rejection is what u boast, Have this match transfered to AWOL how a topical head beating u w/ these notes nah If he claim he a beast then I'll have this animal slaughtered as payment, Yall wud think im against animal rights da way'll have cashmere all on the pavement. I pronounce cashmere "cash-mere", not really "cash-smear" Get ya whistle wet? Pft. U try hard to be part of circles shit even groupies, Act tuff N I'll hit ya blindside till u earn a casting spot on that movie. Been done Cash as frail as used bills one punch'll have his whole career shelved, Cus ur bars are like karps FYI thread, how they stay crying for help! alright See ur bars like brokes disappearin' act at the most, Put the working to jokes how I muff em' while ur verses look like one of his votes. alright vs. You're nothing so just stop. Girls hate you..ain't sucking on your cock, son If a bitch goes into a building with multiple Story's...she's jumping off the top one Nice You see me walking around with dimes...it probably hurts, my dude Cause the closest you came to a chick on your arm is copying Orc's tattoo I did this hours before you, you get no credit Don't wanna hear how you're honestly grossing bucks...We already know you suck If you're ever close to a fortune, Teller...they're saying you'll always be broke as fuck Eh One hook is dentin' your face, kid...He's shook, the prick is just basic Peeped your record... All I see is your numbers going down...it's like I'm looking into the Matrix Solid, but seen similar It's the end of your life when I render the knife....more than felonies get copped But don't worry...the grave site's on me. Cause every good StoryTeller needs a plot Solid I really wanted to break this down line by line to tell @Cashius that I did the orc tattoo line earlier today in my battle....bitch :P. But I had cash here. Story started picking it up at the end, but the inconsistency really hurt him for me. I got Cash taking it. V/ Cashius __________________ No Cap Gang.

12-08-2014, 06:12 PM	#3
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257523	10.

12-10-2014, 11:01 AM	#6
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257523	No thanks.

12-11-2014, 10:18 PM	#7
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257523	You're nothing so just stop. Girls hate you..ain't sucking on your cock, son If a bitch goes into a building with multiple Story's...she's jumping off the top one You see me walking around with dimes...it probably hurts, my dude Cause the closest you came to a chick on your arm is copying Orc's tattoo Don't wanna hear how you're honestly grossing bucks...We already know you suck If you're ever close to a fortune, Teller...they're saying you'll always be broke as fuck One hook is dentin' your face, kid...He's shook, the prick is just basic Peeped your record... All I see is your numbers going down...it's like I'm looking into the Matrix It's the end of your life when I render the knife....more than felonies get copped But don't worry...the grave site's on me. Cause every good StoryTeller needs a plot

12-13-2014, 07:49 PM	#9
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Cashius outclassed Storyteller here. I didn't really like anything Story put forth, the disses had no sting. Cashius had a witty first bar, and I also kind of liked the Matrix line. Vote - Cashius

12-14-2014, 06:59 AM	#11
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	i liked every single Cash bar. i feel like a fangirl. it all hit tho tbh. chick on my arm bar was a nice flip i was gonna use but u and swerve got there first. storyteller, have a look at how Cash words his shit. it's sort of basic but in a good way, you're trying too hard to emulate the greats but if u just write stuff that's concise, simple, & hard you'll be way more consistent a la Cashius. Cash got it

12-14-2014, 08:42 AM	#12
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	Storyteller had blindside Cashius had an overall solid verse. Fortune Teller lotb V-cash

12-14-2014, 02:54 PM	#13
kami Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 91 Battle Record: 3-7 Champed - 1-2 Season 2 - 24hr Photo Tournament - Fight Night XXXIV - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 1054905	Liked cashmere and muff vote lines, but cash killed this with fortune teller and multiple story's. Vote Cash

12-14-2014, 04:38 PM	#14
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	You're nothing so just stop. Girls hate you..ain't sucking on your cock, son If a bitch goes into a building with multiple Story's...she's jumping off the top one ^^^Dope It's the end of your life when I render the knife....more than felonies get copped But don't worry...the grave site's on me. Cause every good StoryTeller needs a plot Vs Cash as frail as used bills one punch'll have his whole career shelved, Cus ur bars are like karps FYI thread, how they stay crying for help! V/Cash, story u need to work on ur wording an making it harsher...keep battling dawg u'll get there, cash was just better here, opener was dope, cool solid verse. props to both. __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

12-14-2014, 05:49 PM	#15
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	Muff vote Vs Closer n matrix Cash was stronger with the direct quotes. St used a lot of wp that's already been used on cash. V cash

12-14-2014, 09:54 PM	#16
King Karaoke Stackin' wins... Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,515 Battle Record: 61-20 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - Survivor Tournament - Netcees Battle League (6x) - Netcees Gimmick Tournament Rep Power: 10353697	Hi... That cashmere line was fire... I've never seen that used against him before... But the rest of your verse wasn't as hard hitting... First four from cash weren't impressive... Matrix and closer were solid... Vote-cash for being more consistent... Bye.... __________________ the Outsiders Orc \| ill nik-A \| Sn00p \| King Karaoke

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