Sittin' On Top Of Your Anus

ogiatje · 12-03-2014, 12:21 AM

flow is cool dude, could be a bit more smoothed out but i've been listening to the new wu album so this is rocking with me right now.

dressed in overalls with a tooth pick hangin'
on for dear life,
crammed between jagged teeth
restin' above the matted whiskers on a cat who's beard's white
I don't think he's the brightest kid"

the imagery right there had me. loved this part. there was a lot of short entertaining parts outside of this part but nothing that hit me as hard as this part did. i think overall it lacked a bit of focus but this was super fun for a quick write and that's what i'm taking it as, so good job dude.

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12-03-2014, 12:21 AM	#4
ogiatje Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 6 Rep Power: 0	flow is cool dude, could be a bit more smoothed out but i've been listening to the new wu album so this is rocking with me right now. dressed in overalls with a tooth pick hangin' on for dear life, crammed between jagged teeth restin' above the matted whiskers on a cat who's beard's white I don't think he's the brightest kid" the imagery right there had me. loved this part. there was a lot of short entertaining parts outside of this part but nothing that hit me as hard as this part did. i think overall it lacked a bit of focus but this was super fun for a quick write and that's what i'm taking it as, so good job dude.