Obnoxious 1-1 Vs E Tha Real 1-1 -OBNOXIOUS WINS

Allen Knight · 12-01-2014, 05:56 PM

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 4th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread

First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Obnoxious @E Tha Real

Glossy Finish Dick Lips · 12-01-2014, 10:35 PM

Yerp, 10.

E Tha Real · 12-02-2014, 01:09 AM

Sounds good.

@ Obnoxious, i'll get a verse up soon.

E Tha Real · 12-02-2014, 01:14 AM

making faggots jaw replica go glass like backboard shots
Only time he was close to a commanding post, it was fort nox
// <---- these still exist in his older sloppy writes
such a waste of space & time, Intersteller had to copyright
Jack cars? I got a carson daly as the TV host
While your basket bike, is the only time we hear E.T jokes
Put up or shut up... your underwhelming shitty scripts
Only time he put UP? Its as his favorite disney flick
Idiot has Abandoned short bars for long bland spits
He's a master baylor, and don't need college transcripts

Glossy Finish Dick Lips · 12-02-2014, 12:20 PM

Listen...

You lack the confidence to win, now I’m stompin this queer,
I’d say he’s in dire need of assurance, but he’s been washed up for years.
Plus, you get no pussy, not one bitch would invest in dude,
So if a hoe fuckin w/ E, she’s trying to overdose before having sex w/ you.
You have no heart, kid’s missin the strongest muscle, it’s true,
In order for you to OD on NoXide just force feed you an entire bottle or 2.
I should stop this abuse before I crush his head at fuckin best,
One punch’ll leave’m in comb-a style & you can call that a brush w/ death.
Predictable fag, I knew which direction you go, now die in hell,
Emotions easily detected through your verses, since they ONLY cry for help.

10, ez.

El Muffin · 12-02-2014, 07:28 PM

hmmm

im at such an impasse right now

let me start w/ the quotes

E had Interstellar. i rly rly liked that

n it kinda fell flat till closer. that wss cool

so 2

obnox

assurance ..iono hear the Shore innit. i pronounce it ass shure rents

E is reallly played but i like ur wrding on the flip

i really didnt like ur nxt 4.

specially comba

but ur closercwas nice

tied in quotes

lotb goes to e

v/ e

but noxs wording is nicccce. concepts underwhelmed imho

love u guys

keep writing

El Muffin · 12-02-2014, 07:28 PM

hmmm

im at such an impasse right now

let me start w/ the quotes

E had Interstellar. i rly rly liked that

n it kinda fell flat till closer. that wss cool

so 2

obnox

assurance ..iono hear the Shore innit. i pronounce it ass shure rents

E is reallly played but i like ur wrding on the flip

i really didnt like ur nxt 4.

specially comba

but ur closercwas nice

tied in quotes

lotb goes to e

v/ e

but noxs wording is nicccce. concepts underwhelmed imho

love u guys

keep writing

Sharp · 12-06-2014, 03:38 PM

up over NS

Spoken · 12-06-2014, 05:47 PM

Interstellar

Vs.

OD and cry for help

Pretty one sided nox was just more well rounded and had clean wording.... bars landed cl3an. E u sort of struggled the closer could have been more fleshed out but still a good hit but no hard hitter

Tic · 12-06-2014, 06:35 PM

Nox got this. His wording was cleaner and that E line, while probably played was the LOTB for me.

E I feel like you are keying your verses, which leads to poor execution. Take some time bruh!

V/ Nox

Bash · 12-07-2014, 12:43 AM

Fuckin w/ e, noxide

Vs

N/A

V/Nox ... Not sure if he really tried cause a lot those bars came off bland imo. And some concepts were all played. All n all overall Nox takes this w/ the better verse.

jilti · 12-07-2014, 01:58 AM

Liked E's first 2 bars. Thought interstellar was LOTB
Comb-a from nox was horrible, otherwise an ok verse

Props to both for dropping early

Tough call but mvgt Nox for a slightly better verse overall

Cashius · 12-07-2014, 10:36 PM

Obnoxious had the more polished verse. E didn't have anything horrible but there wasn't much substance. Nothing really hit hard. Obnoxious was better. He wins.

PotatoSackLegend · 12-07-2014, 10:42 PM

e
first was weak 2nd was ass 3rd was ass too 4th was more ass 5th nice try

ob

first good 2nd pure ass almost lost the battle just because of this mademe jump out my wheelchair for a second then i read it again and i said hell no 3rd was good 4th weak 5th was a good way to end it

ob gets it

Packed Graves · 12-07-2014, 10:46 PM

Interstellar, this was decent.

Vs

E line was decent cause of wording, closer was ok.

Obnoxious just had better wording & better attempts feel like E kind of rushed or rusty.

12-01-2014, 05:56 PM	#1
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Obnoxious 1-1 Vs E Tha Real 1-1 -OBNOXIOUS WINS Netcees Battle League Season VIII Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday, December 4th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes Good luck! @Obnoxious @E Tha Real __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

12-02-2014, 01:14 AM	#4
E Tha Real yes really Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: NC Posts: 362 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 6054895	making faggots jaw replica go glass like backboard shots Only time he was close to a commanding post, it was fort nox // <---- these still exist in his older sloppy writes such a waste of space & time, Intersteller had to copyright Jack cars? I got a carson daly as the TV host While your basket bike, is the only time we hear E.T jokes Put up or shut up... your underwhelming shitty scripts Only time he put UP? Its as his favorite disney flick Idiot has Abandoned short bars for long bland spits He's a master baylor, and don't need college transcripts Last edited by E Tha Real; 12-02-2014 at 09:59 AM.

12-02-2014, 07:28 PM	#6
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	hmmm im at such an impasse right now let me start w/ the quotes E had Interstellar. i rly rly liked that n it kinda fell flat till closer. that wss cool so 2 obnox assurance ..iono hear the Shore innit. i pronounce it ass shure rents E is reallly played but i like ur wrding on the flip i really didnt like ur nxt 4. specially comba but ur closercwas nice tied in quotes lotb goes to e v/ e but noxs wording is nicccce. concepts underwhelmed imho love u guys keep writing __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

12-02-2014, 07:28 PM	#7
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	hmmm im at such an impasse right now let me start w/ the quotes E had Interstellar. i rly rly liked that n it kinda fell flat till closer. that wss cool so 2 obnox assurance ..iono hear the Shore innit. i pronounce it ass shure rents E is reallly played but i like ur wrding on the flip i really didnt like ur nxt 4. specially comba but ur closercwas nice tied in quotes lotb goes to e v/ e but noxs wording is nicccce. concepts underwhelmed imho love u guys keep writing __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

12-06-2014, 05:47 PM	#9
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	Interstellar Vs. OD and cry for help Pretty one sided nox was just more well rounded and had clean wording.... bars landed cl3an. E u sort of struggled the closer could have been more fleshed out but still a good hit but no hard hitter __________________ WP Po'ethics

12-01-2014, 10:35 PM	#2
Glossy Finish Dick Lips Banned Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Astoria, NY Posts: 1,417 Battle Record: 10-4 Rep Power: 0	Yerp, 10.

12-02-2014, 01:09 AM	#3
E Tha Real yes really Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: NC Posts: 362 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 6054895	Sounds good. @ Obnoxious, i'll get a verse up soon.

12-02-2014, 12:20 PM	#5
Glossy Finish Dick Lips Banned Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Astoria, NY Posts: 1,417 Battle Record: 10-4 Rep Power: 0	Listen... You lack the confidence to win, now I’m stompin this queer, I’d say he’s in dire need of assurance, but he’s been washed up for years. Plus, you get no pussy, not one bitch would invest in dude, So if a hoe fuckin w/ E, she’s trying to overdose before having sex w/ you. You have no heart, kid’s missin the strongest muscle, it’s true, In order for you to OD on NoXide just force feed you an entire bottle or 2. I should stop this abuse before I crush his head at fuckin best, One punch’ll leave’m in comb-a style & you can call that a brush w/ death. Predictable fag, I knew which direction you go, now die in hell, Emotions easily detected through your verses, since they ONLY cry for help. 10, ez.

12-06-2014, 06:35 PM	#10
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137909	Nox got this. His wording was cleaner and that E line, while probably played was the LOTB for me. E I feel like you are keying your verses, which leads to poor execution. Take some time bruh! V/ Nox

12-07-2014, 12:43 AM	#11
Bash Barrin' Out Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 577 Battle Record: 16-15 Champed - Fight Night 5 Rep Power: 13649171	Fuckin w/ e, noxide Vs N/A V/Nox ... Not sure if he really tried cause a lot those bars came off bland imo. And some concepts were all played. All n all overall Nox takes this w/ the better verse.

12-07-2014, 01:58 AM	#12
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	Liked E's first 2 bars. Thought interstellar was LOTB Comb-a from nox was horrible, otherwise an ok verse Props to both for dropping early Tough call but mvgt Nox for a slightly better verse overall

12-07-2014, 10:36 PM	#13
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257523	Obnoxious had the more polished verse. E didn't have anything horrible but there wasn't much substance. Nothing really hit hard. Obnoxious was better. He wins.

12-07-2014, 10:42 PM	#14
PotatoSackLegend Potato Sack racin' pro. Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 119 Battle Record: 0-8 Rep Power: 0	e first was weak 2nd was ass 3rd was ass too 4th was more ass 5th nice try ob first good 2nd pure ass almost lost the battle just because of this mademe jump out my wheelchair for a second then i read it again and i said hell no 3rd was good 4th weak 5th was a good way to end it ob gets it

12-07-2014, 10:46 PM	#15
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	Interstellar, this was decent. Vs E line was decent cause of wording, closer was ok. Obnoxious just had better wording & better attempts feel like E kind of rushed or rusty. __________________ back

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