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11-16-2014, 11:58 PM
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Alvin Karpis 1-0 vs Knucklehead 1-0 - KNUCK WINS
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes Good luck! @Alvin Karpis @Knucklehead
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11-17-2014, 12:40 AM
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11-18-2014, 06:29 PM
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11-20-2014, 07:32 PM
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11-20-2014, 07:34 PM
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11-24-2014, 07:48 PM
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2020
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Peeped the show & prove thread and you was smirkin w/ a dame
But she’s fuckin ugly so GOW shouldn’t be the only person workin on his game You gonna roast me huh? Well I’m a let the shotty spray Yall aint gonna see this ginger cook shit unless it’s Bobby Flay Strikta wants to pay $300 to spend a night w/ a THOT, but shit is scary Cuz you wanted to pay $300 just for the thought of seeing a pic of Kare Plus when you beefed with dude I knew this fucker was timid I saw how this Jew froze & it rivaled the one under is fitted Ginger jew resorts to faggot shit lookin like a young Tettris This Juicy Fruits in his bed every night and I don’t mean a gum fetish My reps mean pull hoes w/ ease cuz I’m fly & dress clean You always act when it comes to pussy, that’s why Seth Green Why claim you pull hoes, you’re chubby and it’s hopeless son This weirdo would let a Chickpea on his face just for a bowl of some I’ll make a sex tape w/ ya dream girl and put it on fuckin blast quick Have ya last chick shootin a video w/ Kar in it on some hush & bags shit |
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11-25-2014, 10:36 PM
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Sup blockhead..
Ur Redskin's an easy pick w daddy problems so I might smash All I gotta do is Server Issues & that whore'll go down longer than the site crash Srsly destroy ur injun family, that hoe is a renowned smut I'mma run up in Alehouse & make it my home quicker than the town drunk & kill this hobby for karp, my verses wow when I'm swinging so rude I'ma leave voters w/ their hands on their mouths like ur girl was singing to u On my Darren Wilson - bars cause riots when I'm landin' the ether Trust I'll leave you on the concrete Like Mike without those magical sneakers Ur luck ends here. Washed up but still he tries to cling to the rush When I have rust I Shake It Off.. You just call that your jam & sing to a brush Been around too long w/ joke site bars, NC needs the swiping to end We all hope Karp'll tunnel into a depression that stops him from ever typing again Robbed me in 4 FN finals, but this ain't keystyle. U gettin' runied mate Anything can happen in the blink of an eye.. & after this that's how u'll communicate Won't cheat me this time. I'mma show u more pain than u ever felt dude Push Allies in the back of his head 'til a thousand AIM votes couldn't even help you |
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11-26-2014, 09:37 AM
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Peeped the show & prove thread and you was smirkin w/ a dame
But she’s fuckin ugly so GOW shouldn’t be the only person workin on his game Strikta wants to pay $300 to spend a night w/ a THOT, but shit is scary Cuz you wanted to pay $300 just for the thought of seeing a pic of Kare Why claim you pull hoes, you’re chubby and it’s hopeless son This weirdo would let a Chickpea on his face just for a bowl of some BOLD was best bar in your verse, IMO. Quoted bars were raw, tho. vs Ur Redskin's an easy pick w daddy problems so I might smash All I gotta do is Server Issues & that whore'll go down longer than the site crash Ur luck ends here. Washed up but still he tries to cling to the rush When I have rust I Shake It Off.. You just call that your jam & sing to a brush Been around too long w/ joke site bars, NC needs the swiping to end We all hope Karp'll tunnel into a depression that stops him from ever typing again Robbed me in 4 FN finals, but this ain't keystyle. U gettin' runied mate Anything can happen in the blink of an eye.. & after this that's how u'll communicate BOLD was your dopest bar, IMO. Server issues was nice, Shake it off was dope, Blink of an eye was tough. I got Knuck w/ just one more quote. BOTW right here, IMO. Both dropped some dope shit. I think Karp's wording helped him a lot here, but that 300 bar was fire and gave me a laugh, so props. Knucks Karp'll tunnell bar was dope as well. Clean & slick as fuck. v/Knuck |
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11-26-2014, 12:36 PM
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Barrin' Out
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Workin on his game, jew froze, gum fetish
vs site crash, singing to you, to a brush (lol), blink of an eye v/Knucklehead. Really nice battle. I have Knuck winning w/ more quotes. I was diggin his concepts a tad bit more. |
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11-26-2014, 04:30 PM
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Leave you flatlined.
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Fire battle.
Karpis 1 - nice line, good personal 2 - a bit vague of a reference but this is not bad 3 - nice hit. Could've been simpler though the THOT/thought didn't have to be worked in. Still a mean line. 4 - Jew Fros was a decent light jab 5 - Jew see fruits good np but concept was average. 6 - this was lazy 7 - Chickpea line was chuckles 8 - nice delivery, should've said a vid from Kar but that's being picky Overall nice verse, no huge missed but some avg lines. Knucklehead 1 - decent 2 - ale house is decent 3 - that's 3 Indian jokes in a row, this one did not hit. 4 - this needed a different setup or a different punchline bc it doesn't match. 5 - shake it off nice delivery, chuckles 6 - karp'll tunnel is a bit played but I liked the finish 7 - blink of an eye is lotb 8 - as a whole this was ok Overall nice verse, some of the concepts weren't executed to my liking. I've got Kar winning this based on better execution of avg lines.
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11-27-2014, 12:54 AM
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Peeped the show & prove thread and you was smirkin w/ a dame
But she’s fuckin ugly so GOW shouldn’t be the only person workin on his game Why claim you pull hoes, you’re chubby and it’s hopeless son This weirdo would let a Chickpea on his face just for a bowl of some I’ll make a sex tape w/ ya dream girl and put it on fuckin blast quick Have ya last chick shootin a video w/ Kar in it on some hush & bags shit Vs. Ur Redskin's an easy pick w daddy problems so I might smash All I gotta do is Server Issues & that whore'll go down longer than the site crash & kill this hobby for karp, my verses wow when I'm swinging so rude I'ma leave voters w/ their hands on their mouths like ur girl was singing to u Ur luck ends here. Washed up but still he tries to cling to the rush When I have rust I Shake It Off.. You just call that your jam & sing to a brush Been around too long w/ joke site bars, NC needs the swiping to end We all hope Karp'll tunnel into a depression that stops him from ever typing again Robbed me in 4 FN finals, but this ain't keystyle. U gettin' runied mate Anything can happen in the blink of an eye.. & after this that's how u'll communicate Won't cheat me this time. I'mma show u more pain than u ever felt dude Push Allies in the back of his head 'til a thousand AIM votes couldn't even help you cool battle. Damn that blink of an eye line was fire! V-Knuck |
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11-27-2014, 01:07 PM
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Strikta wants to pay $300 to spend a night w/ a THOT, but shit is scary
Cuz you wanted to pay $300 just for the thought of seeing a pic of Kare My reps mean pull hoes w/ ease cuz I’m fly & dress clean You always act when it comes to pussy, that’s why Seth Green Why claim you pull hoes, you’re chubby and it’s hopeless son This weirdo would let a Chickpea on his face just for a bowl of some vs Ur Redskin's an easy pick w daddy problems so I might smash All I gotta do is Server Issues & that whore'll go down longer than the site crash Robbed me in 4 FN finals, but this ain't keystyle. U gettin' runied mate Anything can happen in the blink of an eye.. & after this that's how u'll communicate Alvin came stronger, plus he had funnier lines. Knuck's concepts weren't cutting it for me aside for the ones I quoted. I liked the blink of an eye line, good impact. Kar was more humorous overall. Vote Alvin |
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11-29-2014, 04:13 AM
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Working on game..juicy fruit..chickpea..300
Vs Shake it off..karpll tunnel..blink of an eye (lotb)..ale house Thought knucks blink of an eye was one of the punches of the year. If he would of had one more bar with that bang he would of won easily butas it stands I'm feeling like al had better misses. Honestly it came down to liking als closer better. Great battle but there can only b one winner V al |
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11-29-2014, 06:48 AM
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Alvin bodied this
Damn every bar too I wouldn't want to battle this nigga right now Wording wordplay punches personals current events Cot damn V Karp
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11-29-2014, 04:50 PM
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Game, jee froze and gumnfetish
vs. shake it off, karpel tunnel (lotb) the blink of en eye I just seen that bar exposed between barcotic vs. Hens I believe but thr flip was nice. Ale house ok I got this dead even but to me I am basing my vote on a cleaner delivery and hoe it read together as a whole for consistency. ... I gotta go with knuck
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11-30-2014, 08:27 PM
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Chickpea lolol
Pic of kare Vs Shake it off Carpal tunnel - sweet Blink of an eye- 2nd week of the season and this will be the dopes line all season lol This was a good matchup, and could use more votes. Its a shame to see either take an L. I got Knuckle on consistency. Vote knucklehead |
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11-30-2014, 11:19 PM
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Foreva us, neva them.
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Peeped the show & prove thread and you was smirkin w/ a dame
But she’s fuckin ugly so GOW shouldn’t be the only person workin on his game Strikta wants to pay $300 to spend a night w/ a THOT, but shit is scary Cuz you wanted to pay $300 just for the thought of seeing a pic of Kare Ginger jew resorts to faggot shit lookin like a young Tettris This Juicy Fruits in his bed every night and I don’t mean a gum fetish vs Ur Redskin's an easy pick w daddy problems so I might smash All I gotta do is Server Issues & that whore'll go down longer than the site crash Srsly destroy ur injun family, that hoe is a renowned smut I'mma run up in Alehouse & make it my home quicker than the town drunk Ur luck ends here. Washed up but still he tries to cling to the rush When I have rust I Shake It Off.. You just call that your jam & sing to a brush Robbed me in 4 FN finals, but this ain't keystyle. U gettin' runied mate Anything can happen in the blink of an eye.. & after this that's how u'll communicate ^^^ sick V/knuckle, this was a dope & closeee battle tbh i had to re-read 2x an come back but honestly i got to give it to knuckle that blink of an eye was the tie breaker & LOTB, i def see why ppl voted for ak cuz this could go either way but imo knuckle took it, really dope battle, def BOTW, enjoyed this one props to both.
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12-01-2014, 12:08 AM
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HE / HIM / FRAC
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Peeped the show & prove thread and you was smirkin w/ a dame
But she’s fuckin ugly so GOW shouldn’t be the only person workin on his game cool You gonna roast me huh? Well I’m a let the shotty spray Yall aint gonna see this ginger cook shit unless it’s Bobby Flay kinda basic Strikta wants to pay $300 to spend a night w/ a THOT, but shit is scary Cuz you wanted to pay $300 just for the thought of seeing a pic of Kare cool Plus when you beefed with dude I knew this fucker was timid I saw how this Jew froze & it rivaled the one under is fitted ok didnt hit too much for me Ginger jew resorts to faggot shit lookin like a young Tettris This Juicy Fruits in his bed every night and I don’t mean a gum fetish dope My reps mean pull hoes w/ ease cuz I’m fly & dress clean You always act when it comes to pussy, that’s why Seth Green ok Why claim you pull hoes, you’re chubby and it’s hopeless son This weirdo would let a Chickpea on his face just for a bowl of some lol what.. didnt hit too much I’ll make a sex tape w/ ya dream girl and put it on fuckin blast quick Have ya last chick shootin a video w/ Kar in it on some hush & bags shit alright Ur Redskin's an easy pick w daddy problems so I might smash All I gotta do is Server Issues & that whore'll go down longer than the site crash cool Srsly destroy ur injun family, that hoe is a renowned smut I'mma run up in Alehouse & make it my home quicker than the town drunk Al/Ale doesnt really work for me & kill this hobby for karp, my verses wow when I'm swinging so rude I'ma leave voters w/ their hands on their mouths like ur girl was singing to u lol ok On my Darren Wilson - bars cause riots when I'm landin' the ether Trust I'll leave you on the concrete Like Mike without those magical sneakers sick Ur luck ends here. Washed up but still he tries to cling to the rush When I have rust I Shake It Off.. You just call that your jam & sing to a brush nice Been around too long w/ joke site bars, NC needs the swiping to end We all hope Karp'll tunnel into a depression that stops him from ever typing again feel like this has been done Robbed me in 4 FN finals, but this ain't keystyle. U gettin' runied mate Anything can happen in the blink of an eye.. & after this that's how u'll communicate nice Won't cheat me this time. I'mma show u more pain than u ever felt dude Push Allies in the back of his head 'til a thousand AIM votes couldn't even help you cool close one but I got knuck on consistency. Good battle but the like mike line was lotb and i thought it was pretty even otherwise v/knuck
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