Vulgar 0-0 vs Swerve 0-0 - VULGAR WINS

Packed Graves · 11-21-2014, 06:51 AM

Drawing board was decent flip on old concept, shoelaces was dope, other then that your verse seemed rather generic & stretched. Feel you should slim your bars down a little you definitely got some dope concepts but your bars seem to drag on.

Vs

The certain personal, seadad was funny, this wasn't a great verse but you stayed with a personal aspect which kind of gave your jabs a better sting then just being a punch. Nothing was over the top but the ones that connected hit home.

Vote awerve even though Vul had lotb.

11-21-2014, 06:51 AM	#15
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	Drawing board was decent flip on old concept, shoelaces was dope, other then that your verse seemed rather generic & stretched. Feel you should slim your bars down a little you definitely got some dope concepts but your bars seem to drag on. Vs The certain personal, seadad was funny, this wasn't a great verse but you stayed with a personal aspect which kind of gave your jabs a better sting then just being a punch. Nothing was over the top but the ones that connected hit home. Vote awerve even though Vul had lotb. __________________ back

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