Battle Rap 12

Exis · 11-13-2014, 09:30 PM

“I eat, eat, eat, eat, mc’s” - you’re just a herbivore.
I treat rhyming like a fervent cause,
Possess more power than a multipurpose core with a surge strong enough *to* burn the cords connected to your circuit board.

^^Niceness.

I make it seem easy but the degree of difficulty is absurdly tall and the margin for error is inversely small -
The Hungarian, French and Japanese judges all gave me a perfect score.

^^Lol...Dope.

I’ll pressure your squad until it’s only one on one like a penalty shot.
I let my weapon discharge before a second has gone. You’ll get severed apart before you can even attempt to respond.
And when you arrive in hell you can send my regards.
I’m exceptionally calm, my presence is large and causes hectic alarm.
A chemical professional with no ethical qualms.
You don’t understand where you went wrong.
Did it ever occur that I’m simply better with words? Destroy your pathetic façade.
The punches you throw feel like a gentle massage.

^^Raw.

Could quote alot but those I liked most.

I've peeped a few of these, don't think I got at the last one...but this is tight.Your flow is surprisingly slick with it given the fact your lines are pretty lengthy...I've no problem with stretched lines in text especially when readin' them shit's all butter like, which is the case here...your meta's & wordplay mixed with humorous content makes this another sick piece to add to your ever growin' catalog of flames Zyg.

Stay uppity.

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11-13-2014, 09:30 PM	#6
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	“I eat, eat, eat, eat, mc’s” - you’re just a herbivore. I treat rhyming like a fervent cause, Possess more power than a multipurpose core with a surge strong enough to burn the cords connected to your circuit board. ^^Niceness. I make it seem easy but the degree of difficulty is absurdly tall and the margin for error is inversely small - The Hungarian, French and Japanese judges all gave me a perfect score. ^^Lol...Dope. I’ll pressure your squad until it’s only one on one like a penalty shot. I let my weapon discharge before a second has gone. You’ll get severed apart before you can even attempt to respond. And when you arrive in hell you can send my regards. I’m exceptionally calm, my presence is large and causes hectic alarm. A chemical professional with no ethical qualms. You don’t understand where you went wrong. Did it ever occur that I’m simply better with words? Destroy your pathetic façade. The punches you throw feel like a gentle massage. ^^Raw. Could quote alot but those I liked most. I've peeped a few of these, don't think I got at the last one...but this is tight.Your flow is surprisingly slick with it given the fact your lines are pretty lengthy...I've no problem with stretched lines in text especially when readin' them shit's all butter like, which is the case here...your meta's & wordplay mixed with humorous content makes this another sick piece to add to your ever growin' catalog of flames Zyg. Stay uppity.