Jimbo vs. megatron {megatron wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

Yo I know your mum was the type to shag anyone who came to the door
You'd think wit a postman's genes you'd deliver, but the only delivery was you from that whore!
Go back to lets beef before AOB finds out da way your beggar ass writes
Cus they wont need to be technical geeks to understand the term - 'Megabites'
Seriously hes only here to battle cus he heard about AOB's archives
His lines are so rehashed ill be surprised if they dont start #overusedpunchlines

opener nah. family guy line was a cool concept the bar was just not worded nicely at all. postman line got a chuckle it wasn't DELIVERED well but i like the idea. megabites okay, still shaky wording. rehash ehh okay. decent i guess. wouldn't quote any of those if I was voting in a higher tier battle but those are the ones that weren't to bad. you really need to work on setting up your punches and ending ur bars nicely so the concept works and the shit hits hard. concepts are there though.

vs

Lets get it clear, ya not a thug ur a queer.ill stomp ya leg w. the force of 7 bears
You can try n claim u G to the bone till i have u lookin at it like kevin ware
U not the scrap type ,I dont even think u strike fear in a midget
If i give jim a knee he'll be out cold, quiet all u hearin is crickets
You on kno who u facin fool, im bout that action ill take ya cash b4 u can make a move
It aint the same for u, cuz if Bo jack son the only thing he stole was a base or two

last two were bad misses, the closer was super played. those quotes were cool though same as jimbo though u don't word ur lines well at all, makes it more awkward to read. the crickets concept was LOTB though so

v/megatron

both need to just work on using those concepts at another level